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Reply With QuoteI really liked it!! it's really depressing actualy... but you express your emotions very well, i can feel the sadness, i can truly tell you love this person. Good work! ^_^
I am dying, slowly
Bit by bit without you
It started by a confession,
That separated us
I am sorry, I really am
Even if they don’t mean everything without you
I am forlorn, don’t you see?
I am suffering because of what I did …
I love you please don’t leave me,
I miss you please come back
I adore you I cannot live without you
I need you please love me back!
Stab my heart. I'd still live for you~
Leave me and I'll come back,
Even though I want to die I will live-
To see your warm smile again.
That's how much I love you...
I want to be with you again,
I want you to be in my arms,
I love you and I always will
Your presence makes me full of joy
I am happy whenever you’re with me,
I laugh when you do something silly
I don’t want you to love someone else
I have strong feelings for you; I honestly do love you
I am dying as my heart is bleeding
I need you to rescue me,
I want to feel your touch; your presence
I want … to be with you
Everything around me is going dark,
I cannot focus, am I really dying?
No .. I want to live,
But I –
The end…
Sorry about this, this isn’t really a polished poem, so yeah >_>
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I really liked it!! it's really depressing actualy... but you express your emotions very well, i can feel the sadness, i can truly tell you love this person. Good work! ^_^
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
Thats a sweet/cute poem.^^
Thanks lifeforce! (:
Sometimes you have to save yourself Rushil~!!
Lovey poem, and could use some work, I hate when I know what is coming next~
Damn, give it a rest already! Focus your poetry on some violence or something..............quit wasting it over bitches!
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
you call women bitches!!!!!!!Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23
and i agree. but it was cute and sweet but it should be over wit
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
O.o Sounds like you cheated on your loved onelol is this on your life or just a poem you wrote
It's the whole deal with that Foreverinyourarms chick..........she broke up with him to hook back up with her ex and he's been taking it very badly.
Move Along.
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