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    Fading away without you-

    I am dying, slowly
    Bit by bit without you
    It started by a confession,
    That separated us

    I am sorry, I really am
    Even if they don’t mean everything without you
    I am forlorn, don’t you see?
    I am suffering because of what I did …

    I love you please don’t leave me,
    I miss you please come back
    I adore you I cannot live without you
    I need you please love me back!

    Stab my heart. I'd still live for you~
    Leave me and I'll come back,
    Even though I want to die I will live-
    To see your warm smile again.
    That's how much I love you...

    I want to be with you again,
    I want you to be in my arms,
    I love you and I always will
    Your presence makes me full of joy

    I am happy whenever you’re with me,
    I laugh when you do something silly
    I don’t want you to love someone else
    I have strong feelings for you; I honestly do love you

    I am dying as my heart is bleeding
    I need you to rescue me,
    I want to feel your touch; your presence
    I want … to be with you

    Everything around me is going dark,
    I cannot focus, am I really dying?
    No .. I want to live,
    But I –

    The end…

    Sorry about this, this isn’t really a polished poem, so yeah >_>

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    Re: Fading away without you-

    I really liked it!! it's really depressing actualy... but you express your emotions very well, i can feel the sadness, i can truly tell you love this person. Good work! ^_^
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    Re: Fading away without you-

    Thats a sweet/cute poem.^^


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: Fading away without you-

    Sometimes you have to save yourself Rushil~!!

    Lovey poem, and could use some work, I hate when I know what is coming next~
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    Re: Fading away without you-

    Damn, give it a rest already! Focus your poetry on some violence or something..............quit wasting it over bitches!
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    Re: Fading away without you-

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    Damn, give it a rest already! Focus your poetry on some violence or something..............quit wasting it over bitches!
    you call women bitches!!!!!!!
    and i agree. but it was cute and sweet but it should be over wit

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    Re: Fading away without you-

    O.o Sounds like you cheated on your loved one lol is this on your life or just a poem you wrote

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    Re: Fading away without you-

    It's the whole deal with that Foreverinyourarms chick..........she broke up with him to hook back up with her ex and he's been taking it very badly.
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