Thread: Failing Love

Hmmm... I like it, so you can consider your poem as very good ^^ because I don't like suicide poems, they make me too much worried about the people who write them... This one has something enchanting...

A lill bit of punctuation wouldn't harm.. otherways people might misunderstand some things and here:
"Who should put up with
All the phrases and lies"
Put the "with" in the next line, I think then it would be easier to read it...

The rest of the things are perfect for me.
And now, when I read it for the second time, I have to say that the last stranza is just freaking good... scary...

Nice work here!!!