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    Red face Faith

    Alright I will Post another one .

    Here you all Go!!!

    In This World Of Disorder

    Evil Thrives.

    The Corrupted

    Walk The Streets Without Resitation

    With Out Pride Or Compassion

    And What Of Value?

    That Is To Say:

    Aru. Soru. Zan.

    An Unpleasent Wind Is Blowing

    Bring A Bitter Coughs

    I'm The Only One Who Beleves

    The Era Has Lost It's Way.




    But this I got from someone, but I can't find who so it's not really mine and I wanted to share this with everyone soo sorry.
    Last edited by sora the king of dreams; Jul 07, 2006 at 12:24 AM.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Re: Faith

    ns, its very how do u say... tangled up, repeating that the world is in darkness and life has lost its touch

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    Re: Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by eldest
    ns, its very how do u say... tangled up, repeating that the world is in darkness and life has lost its touch
    *scraches head and smiles*
    Hhahahaha Ya I kinda Tangled it up Didn't I hahahaha sorry about that, but It's My first time Doing a Poem.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Faith

    Dude, cliche to no end. Life is crap, the world is bad, WE KNOW!! Write about something new for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Resitation isn't a word.
    Writing is life again.

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    Re: Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by Immortal Warrior
    Dude, cliche to no end. Life is crap, the world is bad, WE KNOW!! Write about something new for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Resitation isn't a word.
    Well Thank For your comment, But It's the first time I did this and It might be the Last time I do this so if you don't like it then Don't POST IN HERE.

    And I tryed to spell it out the Best I can.

    And It is Just A poem It doesn't Mean Anything.
    Last edited by sora the king of dreams; Jul 06, 2006 at 06:27 PM.

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Faith

    (n.n) yay! Sora-san is trying his best to recite poems!
    mmm... it's a bit tedious but--- the tediousness of your poem explains the how hectic and disorder the world is!

    (=^_^=)

    ja ne, Im going to Singapore for a while~ see ya~
    *hugs sora-san's feet*
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    Re: Faith

    Quote Originally Posted by Aya-kun
    (n.n) yay! Sora-san is trying his best to recite poems!
    mmm... it's a bit tedious but--- the tediousness of your poem explains the how hectic and disorder the world is!

    (=^_^=)

    ja ne, Im going to Singapore for a while~ see ya~
    *hugs sora-san's feet*
    Thank you and I hope you come back *Hugs Aya-kuns Leg*


    Baaa~

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Faith

    Every poems has its own meaning..... That's not bad...... Try writing more poems...... Sometimes, it can come out from your heart.... All you need:

    Inspirations, feelings, interest, determination, effort, and never give up just bcuz you get a nasty comment..... No one is perfect. We start from our worse and improve ourselves- that means we learn from our mistakes......

    Don't stop writing poem just bcuz you are given a bad comment.... Thank you for sharing your work with us.....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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