Faith

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 05:52 PM

Alright I will Post another one .

Here you all Go!!!

In This World Of Disorder

Evil Thrives.

The Corrupted

Walk The Streets Without Resitation

With Out Pride Or Compassion

And What Of Value?

That Is To Say:

Aru. Soru. Zan.

An Unpleasent Wind Is Blowing

Bring A Bitter Coughs

I'm The Only One Who Beleves

The Era Has Lost It's Way.

But this I got from someone, but I can't find who so it's not really mine and I wanted to share this with everyone soo sorry.

eldest · Jul 06, 2006, 05:55 PM

ns, its very how do u say... tangled up, repeating that the world is in darkness and life has lost its touch

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 06:02 PM

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Originally Posted by eldest

ns, its very how do u say... tangled up, repeating that the world is in darkness and life has lost its touch

*scraches head and smiles*
Hhahahaha Ya I kinda Tangled it up Didn't I hahahaha sorry about that, but It's My first time Doing a Poem.

Immortal Warrior · Jul 06, 2006, 06:11 PM

Dude, cliche to no end. Life is crap, the world is bad, WE KNOW!! Write about something new for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Resitation isn't a word.

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 06:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Immortal Warrior

Dude, cliche to no end. Life is crap, the world is bad, WE KNOW!! Write about something new for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Resitation isn't a word.

Well Thank For your comment, But It's the first time I did this and It might be the Last time I do this so if you don't like it then Don't POST IN HERE.

And I tryed to spell it out the Best I can.

And It is Just A poem It doesn't Mean Anything.

Aya-kun · Jul 06, 2006, 08:40 PM

(n.n) yay! Sora-san is trying his best to recite poems!
mmm... it's a bit tedious but--- the tediousness of your poem explains the how hectic and disorder the world is!

(=^_^=)

ja ne, Im going to Singapore for a while~ see ya~
*hugs sora-san's feet*

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 08:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Aya-kun

(n.n) yay! Sora-san is trying his best to recite poems!
mmm... it's a bit tedious but--- the tediousness of your poem explains the how hectic and disorder the world is!

(=^_^=)

ja ne, Im going to Singapore for a while~ see ya~
*hugs sora-san's feet*

Thank you and I hope you come back *Hugs Aya-kuns Leg*

Baaa~

Adarrah · Jul 06, 2006, 08:56 PM

Every poems has its own meaning..... That's not bad...... Try writing more poems...... Sometimes, it can come out from your heart.... All you need:

Inspirations, feelings, interest, determination, effort, and never give up just bcuz you get a nasty comment..... No one is perfect. We start from our worse and improve ourselves- that means we learn from our mistakes......

Don't stop writing poem just bcuz you are given a bad comment.... Thank you for sharing your work with us.....

sora the king of dreams · Jul 06, 2006, 09:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Adarrah

Every poems has its own meaning..... That's not bad...... Try writing more poems...... Sometimes, it can come out from your heart.... All you need:

Inspirations, feelings, interest, determination, effort, and never give up just bcuz you get a nasty comment..... No one is perfect. We start from our worse and improve ourselves- that means we learn from our mistakes......

Don't stop writing poem just bcuz you are given a bad comment.... Thank you for sharing your work with us.....

You are correct you need all that stuff and your also right no one is perfect.

Thank you soo much and I told everyone that I was just Going to make Three Poems and thats it no more, but Now This is my second one, soo only one more and thats all for me.

Adarrah · Jul 06, 2006, 09:12 PM

Oh ok^^ That's more I like it!

Flare · Jul 06, 2006, 09:14 PM

Well sora this is a suprise you told me that you were going to do this, but I didn't know you were going to show it this soon, but other than that It's a good Poem.

Jul 06, 2006, 05:52 PM	#1 (permalink)
sora the king of dreams Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live in a Place where I'am Truly Happy and that would be with All My Friends Posts: 419 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 348	Faith Alright I will Post another one . Here you all Go!!! In This World Of Disorder Evil Thrives. The Corrupted Walk The Streets Without Resitation With Out Pride Or Compassion And What Of Value? That Is To Say: Aru. Soru. Zan. An Unpleasent Wind Is Blowing Bring A Bitter Coughs I'm The Only One Who Beleves The Era Has Lost It's Way. But this I got from someone, but I can't find who so it's not really mine and I wanted to share this with everyone soo sorry. __________________ I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am. A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao. http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm Last edited by sora the king of dreams; Jul 07, 2006 at 12:24 AM.
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Immortal Warrior Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: MI Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Faith Dude, cliche to no end. Life is crap, the world is bad, WE KNOW!! Write about something new for a change!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Resitation isn't a word. __________________ Writing is life again.
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Adarrah Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 320 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,795	Re: Faith Every poems has its own meaning..... That's not bad...... Try writing more poems...... Sometimes, it can come out from your heart.... All you need: Inspirations, feelings, interest, determination, effort, and never give up just bcuz you get a nasty comment..... No one is perfect. We start from our worse and improve ourselves- that means we learn from our mistakes...... Don't stop writing poem just bcuz you are given a bad comment.... Thank you for sharing your work with us..... __________________ Carve an amble now, Saying that the day's still bright, And let's play with time.
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Adarrah Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 320 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,795	Re: Faith Oh ok^^ That's more I like it! __________________ Carve an amble now, Saying that the day's still bright, And let's play with time.
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Flare Newbie Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: I live by a cherry blossem tree Posts: 16 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Faith Well sora this is a suprise you told me that you were going to do this, but I didn't know you were going to show it this soon, but other than that It's a good Poem. __________________ I live to protect my love one, but where ever I go they would call me there Master. http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...764D415F16.htm http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...60302F397A.htm http://video.freevideoblog.com/searc...3F6AB74759.htm
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