i like it good poem. ceep it up
Don't Play my fool
I know the real you
Is hidden behind tat frown
Now come on and present me you're smile
You Know it will make my day,
To hear you
laughing
on you're way to catch
the second bus
To see you break a dance move
In front of all you're friends
Show me how to pay attention
when you tell me stories from you're childhood
When You come home
A nice grin glued right in your face
THATS WHAT I WANNA SEE! YEA!
I knew you would some day
Spread you're wings and fly
Show the world you can erase you're
Past
completely, with not even a hint of regret
Live life the way Lord told you to
And enjoy the gift you were given
i like it good poem. ceep it up
^-^ The subject matter is this poem is wonderful. I'd love to see some vivid decription about what the narrator wants.
Seduced by Flesh
mmm, the release of the burden which is your past, embracing the futuring and soaring into the infintely blue sky.
Keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Wow that was a pretty nice poem. I really like it, i am not lying, keep it up.
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