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    Faith: Understood

    Don't Play my fool
    I know the real you
    Is hidden behind tat frown
    Now come on and present me you're smile
    You Know it will make my day,
    To hear you
    laughing
    on you're way to catch
    the second bus
    To see you break a dance move
    In front of all you're friends

    Show me how to pay attention
    when you tell me stories from you're childhood

    When You come home
    A nice grin glued right in your face
    THATS WHAT I WANNA SEE! YEA!

    I knew you would some day
    Spread you're wings and fly
    Show the world you can erase you're
    Past
    completely, with not even a hint of regret

    Live life the way Lord told you to
    And enjoy the gift you were given

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    Re: Faith: Understood

    i like it good poem. ceep it up

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    Re: Faith: Understood

    ^-^ The subject matter is this poem is wonderful. I'd love to see some vivid decription about what the narrator wants.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Faith: Understood

    mmm, the release of the burden which is your past, embracing the futuring and soaring into the infintely blue sky.

    Keep it up

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    Re: Faith: Understood

    Wow that was a pretty nice poem. I really like it, i am not lying, keep it up.

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