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Reply With QuoteSo deep. I love the poem!! I hope to see more in the future ok!!!
Faith'ful Soul Thy ever hear the love of one
that speak its true one nature thou
not to hear what the wicked wind
that hears it soul that shall render itself.
Which one will ever love thou my sacred crush,
it shall never cease to exist through the shadow
comes forth a light that Strucks my open heart
that it never stops aching of agony which I fell
upon that midnight star my only help is simply this
never stepping in the light rendering my self to the shadows,
and never beckoning to the ever lasting of death of the undead
souls that never rest in peace.
To the person which i admire the most and thy my love
which itself expresses all into hate that my heart turns
into flaming soul of light thy my life that my only hope
Is simply being in mere of shadows and never be heard again.
My soul is made of darkness I have never devoured the darkness
I was merely born with the shadows thy this thus
my only hope is to step in the light of god which lies my
faith of the soul that shall render itsel into complete
obsolete this is my path that was only chosen and now
I have to live in it, and this is mereley the only and last of my beginning life.
So deep. I love the poem!! I hope to see more in the future ok!!!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Well sure I'll try to make more poems if you would love to and I was wondering if that would make any sense towards my own feeling that I always had.Originally Posted by KuwiRules145
So deep. I love the poem!! I hope to see more in the future ok!!!
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I like the depth and the language of this poem.It burns through my heart and the words seems to help me to appreciate things in life
wow, i wished i knew how to wrote in that style... old language and all @@
the decriptions were very detailed, such sorrow n pain..
tho there were some parts where i find repetitive, mainly cuz of the same choice of words usen like "render" "light" and all. mayb it's juz me xD but yeah, a nice read.
Well thank you I wrote this since my ever lasted pain of heart has never been satisfied with the people I always hang out such as best frineds and most dearest people that I admire the great.
I have other poems that i have never even shared with others and yes i will put it someday when is the right time, well that is all I can say hope to write new ones.
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