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    Thy ever hear the love of one
    that speak its true one nature thou
    not to hear what the wicked wind
    that hears it soul that shall render itself.

    Which one will ever love thou my sacred crush,
    it shall never cease to exist through the shadow
    comes forth a light that Strucks my open heart
    that it never stops aching of agony which I fell
    upon that midnight star my only help is simply this
    never stepping in the light rendering my self to the shadows,
    and never beckoning to the ever lasting of death of the undead
    souls that never rest in peace.

    To the person which i admire the most and thy my love
    which itself expresses all into hate that my heart turns
    into flaming soul of light thy my life that my only hope
    Is simply being in mere of shadows and never be heard again.

    My soul is made of darkness I have never devoured the darkness
    I was merely born with the shadows thy this thus
    my only hope is to step in the light of god which lies my
    faith of the soul that shall render itsel into complete
    obsolete this is my path that was only chosen and now
    I have to live in it, and this is mereley the only and last of my beginning life.

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

    So deep. I love the poem!! I hope to see more in the future ok!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    So deep. I love the poem!! I hope to see more in the future ok!!!
    Well sure I'll try to make more poems if you would love to and I was wondering if that would make any sense towards my own feeling that I always had.

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

    I like the depth and the language of this poem.It burns through my heart and the words seems to help me to appreciate things in life

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

    wow, i wished i knew how to wrote in that style... old language and all @@
    the decriptions were very detailed, such sorrow n pain..
    tho there were some parts where i find repetitive, mainly cuz of the same choice of words usen like "render" "light" and all. mayb it's juz me xD but yeah, a nice read.

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    Re: Faith'ful Soul

    Well thank you I wrote this since my ever lasted pain of heart has never been satisfied with the people I always hang out such as best frineds and most dearest people that I admire the great.
    I have other poems that i have never even shared with others and yes i will put it someday when is the right time, well that is all I can say hope to write new ones.

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