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    Fake smile

    I wear it
    I show it
    I play the part just right

    I lie about it
    I laugh it off
    Make it seem as if everything's alright

    I never let you suspect
    That deep down inside
    When I said that I was ok
    I was really telling a lie

    Beacause I'm giving you my confession
    That I'm wearing a fake smile
    I'm giving you my confession
    That deep down inside:

    I wanna cry
    I wanns scream
    I wanna curse the world
    All because....I can't be your girl.


    It's alright, really it is. I'll be just fine
    I rather be told the harsh words of the truth
    Than the kind words of a lie.
    And I'm alright
    I'm ok.
    You can't help what you feel
    I rather you be happy with her
    But inside I can't help what I feel.


    Beacause I'm giving you my confession
    That I'm wearing a fake smile
    I'm giving you my confession
    That deep down inside:

    I wanna cry
    I wanns scream
    I wanna curse the world
    All because....I can't be your girl.


    Don't get me wrong.
    I still favor you
    Our friendship is genuwine
    Our friendship is true.....

    And I'll always be
    your number one fan that part is forever and true......
    But I can't help the way I feel for you


    Beacause I'm giving you my confession
    That I'm wearing a fake smile
    I'm giving you my confession
    That deep down inside:

    I wanna cry
    I wanns scream
    I wanna curse the world
    All because....I can't be your girl.

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    Re: Fake smile

    wow, tht was beautiful, yet sad
    i really like the flow of it, everything fits together perfect, and the topic is clear
    hope to hear more

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    Re: Fake smile

    Thank you. I felt a few parts were off because it sounded a bit too wordy but im glad you thought it fit. ^_^

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    Re: Fake smile

    O_O
    WOW!!!
    I AM speachless!!
    that was like soo great. the emotions and err
    wow i love it.!!!
    the way you repeated certain stanzas like umm this one

    I wanna cry
    I wanns scream
    I wanna curse the world
    All because....I can't be your girl

    yea i like it. ^_^
    you just put this all together so like great.

    OH and i noticed that your sig and avi match it.
    Did you do that on purpose??? Just wondering.
    i love it!!
    Keep up the good work! ^_^

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    Re: Fake smile

    Because I'm giving you my confession
    That I'm wearing a fake smile
    I'm giving you my confession
    That deep down inside:

    I wanna cry
    I wanns scream
    I wanna curse the world
    All because....I can't be your girl.

    It's alright, really it is. I'll be just fine
    I rather be told the harsh words of the truth
    Than the kind words of a lie.
    And I'm alright
    I'm ok.
    You can't help what you feel
    I rather you be happy with her
    But inside I can't help what I feel.
    Woah... Your sorrow and desire to be honest with yourself and that person really comes across nicely. Though the feelings might be incomprehensible to people who haven't gone through what you have, to people that have, you've pretty much stolen the words out of their mouths. The whole wanting to be honest thing somehow reminds me of Anna and Kitty from Anna Karenina, too... And that's a good thing, by the way.
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    Re: Fake smile

    I'll agree that it sounds off in some places. However it didn't detract from the overall feelings that you conveyed. <3

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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