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    The Fake World Thats Real?

    The pointless ranting of a heart that
    is sad and pathetic , these are the thoughts
    of somone who thinks the world is against them
    they find no solace in the knowledge that it dosnt
    really matter.


    A nice cool breeze under a withering dead
    tree , blood soaked grass and colourful
    lies are there reward for all the darkness they
    try to make others see , how sad there world is
    when they are ignored.

    No one loves me , the world hates me and
    is sick of me , all the words tell the story of
    someone who is lost in there own world why can things
    be more simple? , there body aches and there hands full
    of pain there milk all the pain they can get for sympathy.

    Broken and alone is there life story , never caring for
    how they affect those around them ,it seems to be to much for
    them to hold back the pain and offer a smile because of how
    there used to having people feel sorry for them.

    All the sadness and horror and fantasy they live borderlines
    insanity from which they will never escape , they say the empty
    can rattles the most they have 2 cans to be twice as annoying ,
    why cant they see how sad and lonely they are always looking
    for a handout emotionally.

    Never knowing , never resting , always troubled they will
    never see the real world because of there ideal world full of
    pain and discontentment they live in how sad and alone they are
    and happy they are when you feel sorry for them.
    __________________________________________________ _____

    this poem is about how some people live off the feelings of
    others when they have none for themselves , and no matter
    how mad or mean you seem to be to them so they can get a life
    they seem to thrive on anything you give them , by saying stuff
    like the world is against me and hates me etc.

    people need to realise that it isn't the world that's against them
    or hating them its there inner self thats making things hard for
    them and until they stop All the crying and sadness they put
    everyone through they will always be that sad insignificant
    person that thrives on how others feel which is sad.

    personally i think people become like that through
    years of never having that one person there to be for them
    but i dont think they have a right to make others feel bad
    pver bad things like for example using an ilness or a broken heart
    tp gain sympathy and false happiness.

    any comments or sugestions are welcomed
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    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Fake World Thats Real?

    i loved your poem! ^^ its as simple as that =] great details, good imagery ^^ like i said i love it without a doub
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    Re: The Fake World Thats Real?

    Good work Holder! I really like how you always explain the meaning of your work/
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    Re: The Fake World Thats Real?

    lol ^^ gotta agree with peachy.. it makes it easier to understand what u truly want to convey in ur poems ^^ nicely done...and like always ur descriptions are always good ^^

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