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I know she loves me
She took my heart
So many times
Ever since from the start
I look at her face
Watching her beauty
I listen to her voice
Her words go right through me
I take her everywhere
Her smiles I love so much
Sometimes I wonder
If I please her and such
Am still working on the rest, so can you guys tell me how good this is?
whoa u really have a good sense of words keep up the good work and don't let anyone tell u it's rubbish cos that is sum series work well done keep up the good work:hattip::hattip:
you need to use some punctuation though. other than that it is pretty good.
I like it very much... a good work indeed... be sure to continue it!!!! ^^
You can really feel love in this one... very lovely...
keep up te good work :) i like it...but don't let her take your heart again ;)
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This poem is really good on a occasion this really describes on your feelings towards this person if you had been thinking about her which was really upsetting to you but really great job keep on working on the rest hope to see more. ^-^
How cute and romantic!!! Your love for that person is just so adorable! I hope to read more of your poems!!!! :D: