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    Fall in love

    I know she loves me
    She took my heart
    So many times
    Ever since from the start

    I look at her face
    Watching her beauty
    I listen to her voice
    Her words go right through me

    I take her everywhere
    Her smiles I love so much
    Sometimes I wonder
    If I please her and such

    Am still working on the rest, so can you guys tell me how good this is?

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    Re: Fall in love

    whoa u really have a good sense of words keep up the good work and don't let anyone tell u it's rubbish cos that is sum series work well done keep up the good work

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    Re: Fall in love

    you need to use some punctuation though. other than that it is pretty good.

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    Re: Fall in love

    I like it very much... a good work indeed... be sure to continue it!!!! ^^
    You can really feel love in this one... very lovely...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    keep up te good work i like it...but don't let her take your heart again

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    This poem is really good on a occasion this really describes on your feelings towards this person if you had been thinking about her which was really upsetting to you but really great job keep on working on the rest hope to see more. ^-^

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.

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    Re: Fall in love

    How cute and romantic!!! Your love for that person is just so adorable! I hope to read more of your poems!!!!
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