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    Fallen

    I fell hard when I fell for you
    My heart swelled with excitment

    You fill my every thought
    You words can bring me to my knees

    Love is such an incredible thing
    It changes lives
    It changed me

    I always thought love didn't exist
    It was always painful to think about

    But now its the only thing that will fill my void
    That can satisfy my need

    I know that its silly
    But I can't stand to hold it inside

    I'm that I'm yours
    Are you glad that you're mine?

    Just something that came in my head just now. Not one of my best but it needed to be expressed.


    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Fallen

    Awwww....This poem seems like a sweet poem. It's just so cool! I thought it was a emotional poem well to me. Hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Fallen

    you show great emotion....sounds to me like youve met someone very special...congrats.

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    Re: Fallen

    It's so nice and full of love!!!! Adore it!!! Makes me believe in love again...
    Again I must say I couldn't possibly find anything I wouldn't like!!!
    I enjoyed reading this lovely poem, it's a great work you've done here!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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