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Reply With QuoteI liked the poem. You stayed on the subject of the angel nicely, and you pulled it together in the end with "perfection." Overall, very nice job.
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Fallen for an Angel
My heart has fallen for an angel from heaven
Her heart is as loveing and caring as God's love itself
Her eyes are as welcoming as the light on a warm spring morn
She is as gentle as a cool summer breeze
Her hair a golden hue of a fiery bliss
Her touch is as gentle as her love is pure
This angel is a blessing from heaven itself
My love for the angel is as unbreakable and untaimed as the
wilds of God's great earth
This angel is a goddess
and I am just a fool
Her heart, her beauty, her love, her touch
has all brought me to my knees
No matter how strong I become
I fall harder each day for this angel
I have become lost in her every way
This angel is the light in my darkest of days
bringing me hope of the man I am meant to be
Making my soul stronger each day
Her love does that to me
This angel is my reason for living
For I was dead inside before she saved me from what I once
was
This angel is the one I fell for
For this angel
she is perfection in my eyes
Friends are like Condoms. They're always there for you when things get hard.
I liked the poem. You stayed on the subject of the angel nicely, and you pulled it together in the end with "perfection." Overall, very nice job.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
love makes everything perfect i like how you
descirvribed love in that way.and this poem reminds me alot of
when i was like that i oove a poem that brings back the good
memories
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Thank you. I might post a few more. But most of my poems are more personal.
Friends are like Condoms. They're always there for you when things get hard.
i really like your poem, but i think it would had been better if you had wrote it in stanzas rather than one whole paragraph.
i agree with ketaro on the stanzas but otherwise it was good.
not good; REALLY GOOD
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
I dont really like the wording of this verse. It seems too long for the poem.For I was dead inside before she saved me from what I once
was
Seduced by Flesh
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