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    Fallen Angel's Love War

    Here's a new song that I just wrote..well today lol I hope that everyone likes it and sorry if it's a little long,I couldn't help myslef lol Anyway please read and comment,Thank you and enjoy *bows*


    Title-Fallen Angel's Love War


    I was once an angel,One with pure beautiful white wings
    But now I have fallen,Fallen from the heavenly grace above
    I'm such a pitiful disgrace,For I have been tossed from heavens golden gates
    I took this chance for you,It was all for you!...

    "The golden gates will never open for me again"

    You are the one that beged me to stay,You plead with me everyday
    You said that our love could last through anything and everything
    But did you think that they would never come for me?
    Did you think that we could survive heavens wrath?!...

    "The skys set afire for what we have done"

    We have sined,Is what they all say
    They say it is a sin for us to love one another,But we think differently
    I've beged you to leave me for your own safety,But you always say that you'll never leave my side
    You hold onto me tightly and tell me everything will be alright...

    "It'll all be fine.As long as we have one another,everything will be alright"

    Heavens wrath will rain down on us,For what we have done
    Fire will surround us and Darkness will incase us
    We will be condemed for our so called sin,Heaven will not forgive
    Heaven will never forgive this so called sin!...

    "How could this ever be called a sin?"

    I love him with all of my heart,But they don't heed my plea
    I scream for them to let him live and take me instead
    I'd rather be cast into hell's fire,than see him die right before my own eyes
    I do the only thing that I can do,I grab his hand in mine and run for our lives...

    "We must flee this hellish place"

    We run through the firey darkness,to the otherside
    We race for a place,where we will be safe
    We finally find our eden,our own world
    We are finally,Free!...

    "We have escaped heavens awlful wrath"

    I was once an angel,One with pure beautiful white wings
    But now I have fallen,Fallen from the heavenly grace above
    I'm such a pitiful disgrace,For I have been tossed from heavens golden gates
    I took this chance for you,It was all for you!...

    "This now fallen angel is finally free from heavens grasps.Now I am free to love the one that I hold most dear to my heart."...
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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    "This now fallen angel is finally free from heavens grasps.Now I am free to love the one that I hold most dear to my heart."...




    0_0...........that is awesome................i saw the whole song as a play as i read it................................................



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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    Wow,thanks for the awesome comment bro
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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    Once again you have created another masterpiece. Bravo little sis! I liked it.

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    Thank you so very much sis *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it.
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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    The Question I feel this song asks: How far are you willing to go for true love.
    I usually don't like lovey dovey shxt, but this really caught my attention.
    Speaks volumes about your literature skills......even though this is probably the tip o' the 'berg isn't it??
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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    Yep your right about the song TaurusDemon23
    I'm glad that it did get your attention.It's always nice 2 know what others think of my work.
    Thank you Hmmm,not 2 sure lol It might be.I'm always getting told that i'm getting better and better with each new song that I write though lol.
    Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Sep 02, 2006 at 02:20 PM.
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    Re: Fallen Angel's Love War

    And you are only 16........I wonder how your skill will have improved by 18 hmmmm........I have a little bro that's your age........he's in Claremore, Ok.
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