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    Fallen Dreams

    Fallen Dreams

    My love for you is so strong,It seems to weigh me down at times
    I sometimes get blinded by the things that you say,But their never what I really wanted to hear
    I stand in the shadows,And watch you silently from afar
    The words that I so long to hear fall from your lips,It will never happen cause it was never meant to be...

    "Never"

    When i'm all alone where noone can see me,I let them fall
    I let it all out and cry,This is what you've done to me
    You've caught my heart,And you don't even know it
    This is my fault,For loseing control and falling...

    "Falling"

    I feel like i'm floating at times,When i'm near you
    Your all that fills my mind nowadays,I just can't help but to think of you
    Even as I walk down the streets,Something seems to always remind me of you
    I wish that I could tell you how I feel,But then everything would all come to an end...

    "Can't help it"

    As I lay in bed at night,I can't help but toss and turn
    You fill my dreams each night,It just wont stop
    I can't seem to sleep at night nomore,Cause you are what keeps me awake
    You are the last thought that comes to mind before I fall alseep,I guess that's why I dream...

    "Dream"

    When you speak to me,I feel like i'm on cloud nine
    But it only last a little while,And then your gone
    I'm left all alone,With a hole in my heart
    I know i'm gonna break apart,It's gonna break someday...

    "Someday"

    I just wish that it could be,The way that I want it to be so badly
    But I don't wish to lose you,So it's gonna have to stay this way
    Cause i'd be so lost without you,I'd rather die than let that ever happen
    You are what keeps me going on in this messed up world,You are my dream that keeps me from realitly...

    "My hope"

    My love for you is so strong,It seems to weigh me down at times
    I sometimes get blinded by the things that you say,But their never what I really wanted to hear
    I stand in the shadows,And watch you silently from afar
    The words that I so long to hear fall from your lips,It will never happen cause it was never meant to be...

    "Never,Never meant to be it seems"

    When i'm all alone where noone can see me,I let them fall
    I let it all out and cry,This is what you've done to me
    You've caught my heart,And you don't even know it
    This is my fault,For loseing control and falling...

    "Falling,Falling so hard"

    I've falling and yet I wish to never get back up,I only wish that I was in your arms instead
    As I think about you,I never know if I should smile or cry so sometimes I end up doing both at the sametime
    You are what I want,But you are something that i'll never be able to have
    Cause it seems that it was meant to never be,You and me....

    "I know that you may never return my love but I can still dream"....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    Wonderful job as always sis. I loved your song. I felt all kinds of emotions while reading it. I'm looking forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    very awesome song love like that is dead pretty much no one has that
    kind of devotion hardly bu if you do have hopefully the person that
    receives the love you have will return it.

    my self i belive in this kind of love but its like i am the only one
    that understands what you desribe in this song but its true though
    once you find the one you want you cant really go back to the real
    world unless you want to feel the pain which is what most everyone
    avoids.

    some are even numbed by it which makes them think love like in this song
    is just a dream ,but its real it just isn't used anymore by anyone hardly
    i loved the song sis cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    Hey Angel! Awesome song I even started to sing to it as I read it! Keep making these great songs cause this Fox will always be your #1 Fan! I'm proud of you Angel!

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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    I love being able to read your music and I will go find the others that I have seen floating around here. Keep up your good work and remember your fan is always watching out for your songs.
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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    i like the parts like where you left the *my hope, my dream someday* it gives a little expression on how it makes them feels keep it up

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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    @ CherryBlossom18-Thank you sooooo very much Sis!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it.

    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooo very much for the deep and awesome comment big bro!! *hugs*
    I'm glad that you liked it so much.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooooooooooo very much Fox!!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you thought it was awesome.

    @ Ky-lyrra-Thank you sooooo much Ky-lyrra!!! *hugs* I'm so happy that you liked my newest song.

    @ hellknight-Thank you sooo much Hellknight!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked my song and they way that it was wrote.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    Heh,this one is just up to your usual standard in your song writing.Lovely choice of words which makes it flow nice and smoothly.Also as i was reading it,it was as if i was witnessing this situation.i guess that is what it's like after reading it slowly and carefully.

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