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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    Thank you sooooo much JefferyXie! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it. I'm glad that you thought my choice of words were lovely and that you seem 2 be able 2 see that was going on in my song. Thanks again.
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    Your #1 fan here again saying: I love this one tooo!!! Omg you are good!!
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    hi everyone,im new ,and i would like to make some friends.^^
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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    You know, many things bother me... This piece was alright and that's all I believe it is. Now, about what bothers me...

    Everywhere on this site, people create poems, songs, artwork anything really and people go nuts about it. They say it rocks so very much and that they could never make anything as awesome as that... all the while the reality of it is, the object or piece in question is slumming quite luxuriously in the pits of mediocrity.. 'course I'm not going to name anyone, might get banned or cussed out.

    As the rules go I must give a critique of the song, even if everyone else has forgotten to do so... the spelling is a little off and whenever there is a period or comma and whatnot, there isn't the mandatory space following, just another word, those are the only detectable errors.. I'm going to mention.. hehe

    And, a big hello to Sanctuary, a suggestion, try the intro forums or something.
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    Re: Fallen Dreams

    @ HieisLove-Thank you soooo very much again! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked this song as well.

    @ FLawEdmiNd-Well thank you so very much for bringing these things to my attention. I'm sorry for not spacing when I should have and for my spelling errors. I'll try to do better next time, but i'm only human so I am going to end up making mistakes.
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