Falling

I was fighting a losing battle,
I was always picking the lost cause.
Maybe coz I want to be the Knight,
The saviour who comes to save everyone.

The archangel who protects,
My shield has shattered,
My sword has broken,
My wings have been clipped,
The will is lost, I can no longer protect.

I'm falling, God has forsaken me.
The world crumbles away
Into the abyss where only darkness exist.
My will is lost, my wings are clipped,
My shiedl has shattered,
My sword has broken.
Thy God has forsaken thy servant.
The shadow of the valley of Death,
seems endless, for I am condemn
To wander this valley till my end of my days.

Enjoy ppl and comment plz.

Yes I like this one out of all your stuff, I like poem wise. I do, Favorite part.

The archangel who protects,
My shield has shattered,
My sword has broken,
My wings have been clipped,
The will is lost, I can no longer protect.

Coolest man. Write somethin gelse like this ^_^ :thumb:

Nice poem.:) It's sounds like it's written for a story.

Hey, I agree...... this must be your best work yet.

Great job Blade

Yet another great piece of work by Blade! Great job, buddy. I love this poem a lot. But, I have liked all of the others as well. Create more, and share with us. ^_^