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    AO's Demon Slayer Hexxagon Champion, Match Stick Soccer Champion Blade X may be famous one day Blade X may be famous one day Blade X's Avatar
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    Falling

    I was fighting a losing battle,
    I was always picking the lost cause.
    Maybe coz I want to be the Knight,
    The saviour who comes to save everyone.

    The archangel who protects,
    My shield has shattered,
    My sword has broken,
    My wings have been clipped,
    The will is lost, I can no longer protect.

    I'm falling, God has forsaken me.
    The world crumbles away
    Into the abyss where only darkness exist.
    My will is lost, my wings are clipped,
    My shiedl has shattered,
    My sword has broken.
    Thy God has forsaken thy servant.
    The shadow of the valley of Death,
    seems endless, for I am condemn
    To wander this valley till my end of my days.

    Enjoy ppl and comment plz.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Falling

    Yes I like this one out of all your stuff, I like poem wise. I do, Favorite part.

    The archangel who protects,
    My shield has shattered,
    My sword has broken,
    My wings have been clipped,
    The will is lost, I can no longer protect.

    Coolest man. Write somethin gelse like this ^_^
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    Re: Falling

    Nice poem. It's sounds like it's written for a story.

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    Re: Falling

    Hey, I agree...... this must be your best work yet.

    Great job Blade
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    Re: Falling

    Yet another great piece of work by Blade! Great job, buddy. I love this poem a lot. But, I have liked all of the others as well. Create more, and share with us. ^_^

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