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Reply With QuoteThats A really good Poem,it took me a while to understand tho, but when i did it turned out awesome
Fallin behind
When i don't make it to a point
I start thinking about my mind
About the past and whats behind
It pushes me of the line
Weres theres an eternal pain
When i start losing fate
Thats just doesnt go away
And come back like the rain
Trying to think whats behond
About my future home
I cant keep on going like this
If i cant keep my hopes
Or i sit, surrender till the fin
perdoname michelle!
Thats A really good Poem,it took me a while to understand tho, but when i did it turned out awesome
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A few spelling and capitalization errors. They rhyming was cute at first, and remained cute. However, I believe the verse in each stanza shouldnt have rhymed.
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