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    Re: Falling and Falling

    trying but failing... nice theme and it's really good... ^_^ everyone could relate to it, and it's deep yet easy to understand... keep it up... n,n

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    Its easy to relate to there fore universal, which I like!^_^ I think it was good, one or two things confused me but over all I think it was good, keep on writin'.


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    the frustration of always failing and having to go through stuffs over and over again... (u_u)

    understood... baa~ good job! XD
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    Re: Falling and Falling

    always striving to be good at something only to fail at it i like how you
    expressed this. and like evryone else said it was an awesome poem
    i cant wai to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Falling and Falling

    A very good poem, i like this part..I’ve tried so hard

    To fit in with people
    Let people like me
    Get recognised

    A very strong and gutsy line, to fit in with people who get shamed by society...thank you for writing such a meaningful poem Dancy_SAZ
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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