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    Falling for a Rock Star

    We're just friends
    I tell my self,
    But every time I turn around
    I am missing you.
    I swear you got me,
    Falling for you.

    Falling for a Rocker,
    Is as beautiful as the moon and sea.
    I don’t think I felt such glee.
    The way his strikes his guitar,
    I can hear it from a far.
    I am in love with a rock star.

    Who knew?
    A rocker could be so gentle,
    And be cool,
    With a smile of an angel.
    I swear it’s true.
    You got me fallen for you.
    Dude you gotta tell me what you do,
    To make me fall for you.

    Your music tames the beast in me,
    You know what I mean?
    You got me ready to sing.
    For you I’ll sing and sing,
    As long as I can be under your wing.
    You know what I mean?

    I can hear his music from a far.
    I can’t lie to you,
    I am falling for a Rock Star.
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    Re: Falling for a Rock Star

    I love this sooo much!!! I still can't believe you got it just right!!! I'll finish my part of the deal soon until then, great job!!

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    Re: Falling for a Rock Star

    I can relate to this poem. *Sei loves a bassist though teehee*
    Anyways the rhyming was abit choppy here and there,but it's okay it turned out good. ;3

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Falling for a Rock Star

    oh god, i can definitely relate, i ve been in love w/ a rocker REALLY bad. i really know how u feel.

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    Post Re: Falling for a Rock Star

    Well,

    I've never actually fallen in love with a rock star.... :/ geez

    But your rhyming was amazing along with how you wrote this poem

    It was nice'n Quick to read just the way I like it. :P

    -Zainab

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