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    Re: Falling Through Darkness

    i'm not going to criticize you, this poem wasn't that bad, you could check you spelling though.
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    Re: Falling Through Darkness

    Hmm like what the guys said up there .. i agree with em ^^
    not a bad poem... 2 stars~! for Ok~!

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    Re: Falling Through Darkness

    I feel like the broken record. The spelling was interesting, run a spellcheck, but the images worked well and it just needs a little polishing. three stars!


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    Re: Falling Through Darkness

    A dark and in trusting poem i must say there were some spelling mistakes i seen but other than that i liked it nice job
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