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    Falling For You

    As I seat down on a chair. I saw you walking and passing by.
    Your perfect smile and cute laugh will make my day happy.
    I went home to take a shower, I still think of you in my mind.
    I wanna talk to you. But it seem that you love someone else.

    I love the way you smile.
    I love the way you talk.
    I love the way you laugh.
    I love the way you touch my hand.

    You are such a special person to me.
    Even though were in different worlds right now.
    I will still love you always.
    I will always love you.

    You make my heart rise when you go closer to me.
    You make me blush when you hug and kiss me.
    You make everything that makes me happy.
    You are my everything.

    Even though I never met you in the real life, I will still love you.
    I wanna hug you and kiss your sweet lips.
    You are special in my heart.
    And you will always be in my heart.

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    Re: Falling For You

    wow wow ....it's fabuolas ...
    what this ...a nice romantic poem ...very deep in love ...
    that's very nice i like it ....hope to see more in near time ...

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    Aww! Thats so romantic! Cute poem and I hope to see more.^_^

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    Re: Falling For You

    very nice, I like the format in which you wrote this....keep up the great work!

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    Re: Falling For You

    A truly wonderful poem!!!!! Thank you for drawing my attention to it Sakura!!!! It's just so nice and lovely!!! Enjoyed every single line of it!!! It's so full of love that it made me smile... a lot!!!!
    A great work indeed!

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    Re: Falling For You

    Very sweet poem and so romantic. It would brighten anyone's day for something like this to be read to them. I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: Falling For You

    this poem is really easy to relate too especially in the way you wrote it I like it a lot. you might have to fix your grammar a little (the firts line is a little off if you are trying to impress a english teacher) but i loved it.
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    Re: Falling For You

    Oh!!! Its so adorable its just so cute and romantic but hearing the beganing made me a bit sad but it was amazing really! Hope to see more!
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