Nice one...all poems are really great! I've seen many but htis one's another fave of mine,come check my poem too,if you like.
False Love
Standing in the altar of an old church
Black eyes meet Hazel eyes,
Cold heart meets warm heart,
Fake lover meets true lover.
Memories of the past
Are being hardly reminisced,
As the story of fake love
Slowly begins to unfold.
It seems like yesterday
That I told him “I love you”,
Making a fool out of myself,
Knowing that I love him not.
Love can be learned
I thought to myself,
But trying to love him all this time,
I proved myself wrong.
I feel so guilty
Knowing that he loves me dearly,
That I can’t reciprocate
The love he needs and deserves.
Up to this moment,
Guilt is what I feel,
Knowing that all those years
I did not adore and loved him.
Now I find myself a perfect moment,
To tell him that I’m sorry,
From all those times
That made him believe that I loved him.
In my mind, I’m hoping
That my apologies will heal his heart,
That my apologies will make him
Let go a fake lover that I am.
it's been a long time since i posted a poem... wahehehe!
feel free to post comments and critiques.
thanks for reading
Last edited by raja_psyche; Sep 09, 2006 at 09:47 PM.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Nice one...all poems are really great! I've seen many but htis one's another fave of mine,come check my poem too,if you like.
thanks for your comment Pride_Edward. ^^ it is sincerely appreciated
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
yeah definely thats hw the false love is...even if we try hard to love some1 that we dont love never ends as we thought...Nice Work raja_psyche!
Great way to express yourself! Keep up the good work!
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thanks Arukih and Blue fox for commenting on this poem of mine ^^ *gives cookies and tea to all*
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
I love your poem sounds sad, it's good keep it up.
Your life means nothing to me.
thanks also for your comment Kenchi18, yes this poem is sad...
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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