False love

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 04:00 AM

False Love
Standing in the altar of an old church
Black eyes meet Hazel eyes,
Cold heart meets warm heart,
Fake lover meets true lover.

Memories of the past
Are being hardly reminisced,
As the story of fake love
Slowly begins to unfold.

It seems like yesterday
That I told him “I love you”,
Making a fool out of myself,
Knowing that I love him not.

Love can be learned
I thought to myself,
But trying to love him all this time,
I proved myself wrong.

I feel so guilty
Knowing that he loves me dearly,
That I can’t reciprocate
The love he needs and deserves.

Up to this moment,
Guilt is what I feel,
Knowing that all those years
I did not adore and loved him.

Now I find myself a perfect moment,
To tell him that I’m sorry,
From all those times
That made him believe that I loved him.

In my mind, I’m hoping
That my apologies will heal his heart,
That my apologies will make him
Let go a fake lover that I am.

it's been a long time since i posted a poem... wahehehe!
feel free to post comments and critiques.
thanks for reading

Pride_Edward · Sep 09, 2006, 04:07 AM

Nice one...all poems are really great! I've seen many but htis one's another fave of mine,come check my poem too,if you like.

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 04:08 AM

thanks for your comment Pride_Edward. ^^ it is sincerely appreciated

Arukih · Sep 09, 2006, 06:05 AM

yeah definely thats hw the false love is...even if we try hard to love some1 that we dont love never ends as we thought...Nice Work raja_psyche!

BlueFox1 · Sep 09, 2006, 06:09 AM

Great way to express yourself! Keep up the good work!

BlueFox1

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 09:29 PM

thanks Arukih and Blue fox for commenting on this poem of mine ^^ *gives cookies and tea to all*

kenchi18 · Sep 09, 2006, 09:37 PM

I love your poem sounds sad, it's good keep it up.

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 09:48 PM

thanks also for your comment Kenchi18, yes this poem is sad...

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 09, 2006, 10:59 PM

yeah, u'r right... my poem seems a reply to urs, it's really funny XD
btw: thanx so much for commeting my poem ^-^ not many ppl do... teehee

raja_psyche · Sep 09, 2006, 11:09 PM

thanks for posting your comment Kurumi. it is really appreciated!^^

Shinigami's_Angel · Sep 10, 2006, 12:01 AM

That was a wonderful poem Raja!

It shows just how sad it is 2 have false love,so sad indeed.But I just loved it.Awesome job Raja.

Sep 09, 2006, 04:00 AM	#1 (permalink)
raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	False love False Love Standing in the altar of an old church Black eyes meet Hazel eyes, Cold heart meets warm heart, Fake lover meets true lover. Memories of the past Are being hardly reminisced, As the story of fake love Slowly begins to unfold. It seems like yesterday That I told him “I love you”, Making a fool out of myself, Knowing that I love him not. Love can be learned I thought to myself, But trying to love him all this time, I proved myself wrong. I feel so guilty Knowing that he loves me dearly, That I can’t reciprocate The love he needs and deserves. Up to this moment, Guilt is what I feel, Knowing that all those years I did not adore and loved him. Now I find myself a perfect moment, To tell him that I’m sorry, From all those times That made him believe that I loved him. In my mind, I’m hoping That my apologies will heal his heart, That my apologies will make him Let go a fake lover that I am. it's been a long time since i posted a poem... wahehehe! feel free to post comments and critiques. thanks for reading __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^ Last edited by raja_psyche; Sep 09, 2006 at 09:47 PM.
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Pride_Edward Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 247 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: False love Nice one...all poems are really great! I've seen many but htis one's another fave of mine,come check my poem too,if you like. __________________ Our own site: http://www.fma-adikz.tk
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raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	Re: False love thanks for your comment Pride_Edward. ^^ it is sincerely appreciated __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Arukih Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 387 Thanks: 1 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 9,055	Re: False love yeah definely thats hw the false love is...even if we try hard to love some1 that we dont love never ends as we thought...Nice Work raja_psyche! __________________
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: False love Great way to express yourself! Keep up the good work! BlueFox1
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Sep 09, 2006, 09:29 PM	#6 (permalink)
raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	Re: False love thanks Arukih and Blue fox for commenting on this poem of mine ^^ gives cookies and tea to all __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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kenchi18 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the shadows Posts: 194 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 344	Re: False love I love your poem sounds sad, it's good keep it up. __________________ Your life means nothing to me.
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raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	Re: False love thanks also for your comment Kenchi18, yes this poem is sad... __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: False love yeah, u'r right... my poem seems a reply to urs, it's really funny XD btw: thanx so much for commeting my poem ^-^ not many ppl do... teehee __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,497	Re: False love thanks for posting your comment Kurumi. it is really appreciated!^^ __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	Re: False love That was a wonderful poem Raja! It shows just how sad it is 2 have false love,so sad indeed.But I just loved it.Awesome job Raja. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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