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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | False love False Love Standing in the altar of an old church Black eyes meet Hazel eyes, Cold heart meets warm heart, Fake lover meets true lover. Memories of the past Are being hardly reminisced, As the story of fake love Slowly begins to unfold. It seems like yesterday That I told him “I love you”, Making a fool out of myself, Knowing that I love him not. Love can be learned I thought to myself, But trying to love him all this time, I proved myself wrong. I feel so guilty Knowing that he loves me dearly, That I can’t reciprocate The love he needs and deserves. Up to this moment, Guilt is what I feel, Knowing that all those years I did not adore and loved him. Now I find myself a perfect moment, To tell him that I’m sorry, From all those times That made him believe that I loved him. In my mind, I’m hoping That my apologies will heal his heart, That my apologies will make him Let go a fake lover that I am. it's been a long time since i posted a poem... wahehehe! feel free to post comments and critiques. thanks for reading
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | Re: False love thanks for your comment Pride_Edward. ^^ it is sincerely appreciated
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![]() ![]() Credits: 9,055 | Re: False love yeah definely thats hw the false love is...even if we try hard to love some1 that we dont love never ends as we thought...Nice Work raja_psyche!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | Re: False love thanks Arukih and Blue fox for commenting on this poem of mine ^^ *gives cookies and tea to all*
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | Re: False love thanks also for your comment Kenchi18, yes this poem is sad...
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![]() ![]() Credits: 230 | Re: False love yeah, u'r right... my poem seems a reply to urs, it's really funny XD btw: thanx so much for commeting my poem ^-^ not many ppl do... teehee
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,497 | Re: False love thanks for posting your comment Kurumi. it is really appreciated!^^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,351 | Re: False love That was a wonderful poem Raja! It shows just how sad it is 2 have false love,so sad indeed.But I just loved it.Awesome job Raja. ![]()
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