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    false Pride

    I see the pride in your stride
    But I see the things that you hide
    You are drowning in your tears
    Being suffocated by your fears

    In the night you never sleep
    all you do is cry and weep
    What nightmares haunt you in your sleep?
    What are these secrets that you keep?
    I see you lead I see you guide
    But why oh why can you not confide?
    You never relax you never sit back
    What is this burden that you pack?
    You never smile you never laugh
    A pair of sad eyes does not tell the half

    You offer empty pride
    Belying the secrets you hide.

    I want to say thanks to Beast for his help and instruction
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: false Pride

    oh snap. lol that sounds like half of the people in my town haha

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    Re: false Pride

    it is very well written, it gives a very good distinction that you can not hid your fealings from others. i can relate to this. it is very nice.

    within the darkened realm of the mind, is endless shadows, wrenching pain, warming love, and burning desires.

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