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Reply With Quotewow that is an intersting poem ther Hiei. good job I like the way it rimes. keep up the good work.
when im cold, or when im hot
The fan makes me what im not
There no way to explain this thing
it feels like a big bird flapping its wing
Low, Medium, and high too
without the fan i dont know what id do
Because when im tired its so very soothing
expecially when it keeps on moving!
Theres no way i could live without
keeping you comfy is what its about
if you have no fan, you're living a lie
and if you dont plan on getting one
soon you will die
Tanks zyta
wow that is an intersting poem ther Hiei. good job I like the way it rimes. keep up the good work.
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Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
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First let me say You have a great sig there!
Very nice poem. I like it.
ok its a good poem u just need more work on it read over it again because u have a mistake in it ... i know im not onw to say that but i think if u looked over it ,it can be improved good though ill give u a 8/10
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