that was cool i was thinking of vampire till the end
i like how you lead the me on like that lol it was sort dark
and funy atthe same time after you read the hole thing
veery awesome poem. makes me glad im a human and not a mouse
As she stalks the streets
It catches her eye
As she walks the stedy beat
It runs into the rye
She needs the hunt
She needs the sent
She need the rush
And shes off after it...
Running
And racing
Wating for the catch
Running and pacing
She sents its flesh
The chase is over
The battle is won
It gave up its life
And now its light is gone
Burned Down
Snuffed out
Stepped on
And looked down on
It is over now
The cat can feel it melt
The cat needs this feel
She bites the warm flesh
And the juces run in
She chews the warm flesh
And gives thanks to him
The mouse and his light
With his short and ended fight
She chews away not knowing what next
All she can think of is the tase of his flesh...
there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
that was cool i was thinking of vampire till the end
i like how you lead the me on like that lol it was sort dark
and funy atthe same time after you read the hole thing
veery awesome poem. makes me glad im a human and not a mouse
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
YAY...vampire...(HOW DID YOU KNOW MY SECRET!!!!) I just don wanna be a mousey mouse cause it sounds like it sucks...-MEOW- seeing as i am the cat in all peopls dreams...MWAHAHAHAHA(ok no more caffene)
there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
well im sort of a vamp my self but i keep it low key it freks them out sometimes
and caffine keeps you going thats for sure. and i llike how did this pome it was great
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
that was good- and i really would dislike being a mouse as well...did you hear about the guy who tossed a mouse in a pile of burning leaves and the mouse ran into the house still on fire and burned the whole house down
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
OH MY YEA I HERD ABOUT THAT!!! MOUSEY ABUSE MOUSEY ABUSE!!! I WILL SAVE ALL THE MOUSEYS!!!! after i get done HUNTING THEM!!!!
there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
whoa.. it got me suspended for a while~! I was thinking what could this "stalker'' be! XD wakakaka~!
I like this stanza~
wakakaka~ it kept me guessing~! XDShe needs the hunt
She needs the sent
She need the rush
And shes off after it...
keep it up~!
< is a dummy sheep~ baa~
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-MEOW-
really???
SUSPENCE!!!
suspence is verry yummy
YOU ARE LIEING!!!! IT SUCKS
I KNOW IT
YOU ALL LIE!!!!
-craws to a corner and starts crying-
Whispers: lies lies lies
there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
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