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Aug 12, 2006, 12:20 AM
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| Newbie  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: I don't live anywhere, the only place I can stay safe in is the head atop my shoulders
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 Credits: 110 | Fangs of the forgotten As she stalks the streets It catches her eye As she walks the stedy beat It runs into the rye She needs the hunt She needs the sent She need the rush And shes off after it... Running And racing Wating for the catch Running and pacing She sents its flesh The chase is over The battle is won It gave up its life And now its light is gone Burned Down Snuffed out Stepped on And looked down on It is over now The cat can feel it melt The cat needs this feel She bites the warm flesh And the juces run in She chews the warm flesh And gives thanks to him The mouse and his light With his short and ended fight She chews away not knowing what next All she can think of is the tase of his flesh...
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Aug 12, 2006, 12:38 AM
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Credits: 3,202 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten that was cool i was thinking of vampire till the end i like how you lead the me on like that lol it was sort dark and funy atthe same time after you read the hole thing veery awesome poem. makes me glad im a human and not a mouse |
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Aug 12, 2006, 12:41 AM
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Credits: 110 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten YAY...vampire...(HOW DID YOU KNOW MY SECRET!!!!) I just don wanna be a mousey mouse cause it sounds like it sucks...-MEOW- seeing as i am the cat in all peopls dreams...MWAHAHAHAHA(ok no more caffene)
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Aug 12, 2006, 12:45 AM
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Credits: 3,202 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten well im sort of a vamp my self but i keep it low key it freks them out sometimes and caffine keeps you going thats for sure. and i llike how did this pome it was great |
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Aug 12, 2006, 10:14 AM
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Credits: 436 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten that was good- and i really would dislike being a mouse as well...did you hear about the guy who tossed a mouse in a pile of burning leaves and the mouse ran into the house still on fire and burned the whole house down
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Aug 12, 2006, 12:21 PM
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Credits: 110 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten OH MY YEA I HERD ABOUT THAT!!! MOUSEY ABUSE MOUSEY ABUSE!!! I WILL SAVE ALL THE MOUSEYS!!!! after i get done HUNTING THEM!!!!
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Aug 13, 2006, 12:36 AM
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Credits: 6,613 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten whoa.. it got me suspended for a while~! I was thinking what could this "stalker'' be! XD wakakaka~! I like this stanza~ Quote:
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Aug 13, 2006, 03:51 PM
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Credits: 110 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten -MEOW- really??? SUSPENCE!!! suspence is verry yummy YOU ARE LIEING!!!! IT SUCKS I KNOW IT YOU ALL LIE!!!! -craws to a corner and starts crying- Whispers: lies lies lies
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Aug 14, 2006, 12:07 PM
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Credits: 110 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten MAYBE.... But.... IT IS SO YUMMY RITE???? WHO CARES ok maybe i do.... BUT WHAT EVER YAY hmmmm....now what was i talking about????
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Aug 14, 2006, 03:19 PM
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Credits: 403 | Re: Fangs of the forgotten very good poem!!!!! keep up the work Lost_Love!
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