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    Fangs of the forgotten

    As she stalks the streets
    It catches her eye
    As she walks the stedy beat
    It runs into the rye

    She needs the hunt
    She needs the sent
    She need the rush
    And shes off after it...

    Running
    And racing
    Wating for the catch
    Running and pacing
    She sents its flesh

    The chase is over
    The battle is won
    It gave up its life
    And now its light is gone

    Burned Down
    Snuffed out
    Stepped on
    And looked down on
    It is over now

    The cat can feel it melt
    The cat needs this feel

    She bites the warm flesh
    And the juces run in
    She chews the warm flesh
    And gives thanks to him

    The mouse and his light
    With his short and ended fight

    She chews away not knowing what next
    All she can think of is the tase of his flesh...
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    that was cool i was thinking of vampire till the end
    i like how you lead the me on like that lol it was sort dark
    and funy atthe same time after you read the hole thing
    veery awesome poem. makes me glad im a human and not a mouse
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    YAY...vampire...(HOW DID YOU KNOW MY SECRET!!!!) I just don wanna be a mousey mouse cause it sounds like it sucks...-MEOW- seeing as i am the cat in all peopls dreams...MWAHAHAHAHA(ok no more caffene)
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    well im sort of a vamp my self but i keep it low key it freks them out sometimes
    and caffine keeps you going thats for sure. and i llike how did this pome it was great
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    that was good- and i really would dislike being a mouse as well...did you hear about the guy who tossed a mouse in a pile of burning leaves and the mouse ran into the house still on fire and burned the whole house down
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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    OH MY YEA I HERD ABOUT THAT!!! MOUSEY ABUSE MOUSEY ABUSE!!! I WILL SAVE ALL THE MOUSEYS!!!! after i get done HUNTING THEM!!!!
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    whoa.. it got me suspended for a while~! I was thinking what could this "stalker'' be! XD wakakaka~!

    I like this stanza~
    She needs the hunt
    She needs the sent
    She need the rush
    And shes off after it...
    wakakaka~ it kept me guessing~! XD

    keep it up~!

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    Re: Fangs of the forgotten

    -MEOW-
    really???
    SUSPENCE!!!
    suspence is verry yummy
    YOU ARE LIEING!!!! IT SUCKS
    I KNOW IT
    YOU ALL LIE!!!!
    -craws to a corner and starts crying-
    Whispers: lies lies lies
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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