Here's one I wrote a couple of months ago. Lol like most my poems I'll probable add to it at some point so I don't know if I'm finished writting it.
If only I could find you
Then I think I'd be alright
Maybe if you were here
Darkness would turn into light
If I could search 100 years or more
If I could look the world over
I wonder if you would be there
Or if you don't exist
More than once I've though I've seen
A glimpse of your face
But they were all impersonators
Wolves who would bear their fangs
As soon as backs were turned
---White_Mage88
WWWWOOO first to reply. Sorri due i'll be honest. I'm not really feeling this poem. I only felt it till the last stanza. It seems out of place somehow. But tht's my opinion, I'll firgured it out wen I reread it.
*rereading*
OOOooohhhhh, now i get it. Links together quite nicely. Good job.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
I kinda get wat ur tryin to say.... but the message wasn't potrayed as well as it should hav.
Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
Lol looks like it's back to my poetry journal. To tell you the truth I didn't think this one was very good either, but my friend really liked it so I decided to post it.Originally Posted by cerebrum
Ahhh i see, tht's alright to post something u show to ur friends n they say it's good. Most of my friends say it's good n jkingly say it's emo.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
well i think it is a pretty kool poem. Nice one.
impressive, i couldnt right a poem if my life depended on it, so i admire people that can write like you.
Good poem.
But please dont see wolves as bad animals ok.
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