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    faraway love

    when love comes from far away you dream good dreams that some day your love will find you in the night even though you lose your sight never give up for you are loved kepp her close and share your love
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: faraway love

    (cries soflty)..
    It's so sweet and beautiful...
    It's something I feel it too...
    We have the same feeling..
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: faraway love

    well thats so true if its really true love they will find you someday in this big world

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    Re: faraway love

    this is a really sincere poem. I hope you find your true love! Might be very close to you

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    Re: faraway love

    it comes across as a haiku. but you may want to put some phrasing into how you construct the poem and proof read before you post and check on your spelling. hope you don't take it badly . keep on writing.
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