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    Smile Faraway person

    When you love a faraway person..
    It's hard to love the person..
    But when the faraway person..
    Stands by your side when you need it...
    The faraway person is closer then you think...
    You slowly begin to love the faraway person more...
    You actually want to see him..
    You want to be with him..
    You want to fly to him right away..
    You want to be in his arms..
    You even maybe want to give him a kiss...
    You dream of him..
    But it isnt that easy to do..
    The faraway person says 'don't lose hope'...
    Then inside your heart you will know...
    That your gonna see him soon the faraway person...


    This is a poem that just showed my true feelings...
    It just came in my mind but it is my feelings...
    It has happend to me so that's why...

    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: Faraway person

    I like you poem. It's really nice. ^_^. you express you feelings... i like doing that but in a totally new way. i lik expressing my feelings by playing basketball and writing stories.

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    Re: Faraway person

    * Oh My Lord *
    This Poem is just fill of Emotion, Mixture feeling, Sad, Missing .You do a Great work with the rhythm I like it .overall this poem Just touching...I love the way that the last three lines written too, you wrap the hole story by Nice Ending ..

    Nice work...

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    Re: Faraway person

    thanks for your comment...
    i didnt really thought about..
    how i should set this...
    but still..thanks
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Oh my it is soooooo beautiful baby don't worry your far away man will always be there for you
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    i really appreciate it..sweety...
    and i know you will be there for me...
    just like i will be there for you...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    i can finally understand your poem . awesome ^_^...

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