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    Farewell to Sanity

    It is a poem that I've been working on. I thought it might make a good song but. . . it turned out to be a poem.

    Farewell
    to
    Sanity


    I sit in my world and solve the riddle of my sanity . . . . .
    My memories fade in my own asylum.
    Darkness overcomes my mind.
    I’m lost in the lies that I tell my self,
    My tears will disappear in my fake reality.


    Good bye

    I love my own cold illusions,
    My heart rests in my silent melodies.
    This loneliness has become my friend,
    The emptiness is my salvation.
    This void is better than the chaos that I hide inside.
    My dark past is vanishing in the shadows.


    Good bye

    As I talk to the dreary raindrops that comfort me,
    I say farewell to the sane thoughts that have died.
    This forsaken realm of mine seems unwelcoming at mind,
    But once it strips you of your life,
    It becomes the refuge of your thoughts.


    So now I’ll say farewell to my sanity . . . . .

    Good bye.

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    I really like it little bro. Good Job!

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    whaaaaaa it is so awesome 9.7/10 from me
    i thik it is so deep and sad >>
    i just hope you won't lose your sanity
    I never know just why you run so far away...far away from me

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    great piece of work..
    keep it up

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    a little dark but well-written.... great job!

    They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    That was really Impressive keep it up

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Farewell to Sanity

    Thanx for the comments! ^^
    I think it might need to be longer, but I'm not sure.

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