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    farter apart

    When we stand here
    We don’t gave a care in the world
    But then we are so far apart now
    We care about the world and how far apart we now are
    So we have tried to get back together we just got farter
    Apart......

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    Re: farter apart

    its a cool poem. but a brain tease because you don't know if you meant to write some words of it they are spelling mistakes
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    Re: farter apart

    Falling apart....being farther apart from each other, missing someone, loosing touch, changing to the point of having nothing more in common, picking a different path than another, choosing to live life differently, remembering an aching emotion that is not resolved and that could never be, that is what I just felt.

    I agree that there are qutie a lot of spelling errors, the poem is quite short and well, you repeat quite often far apart or something like that. Let the idea dwell in your mind, let it flourish or simply move you enough to take your time and express it care. Though you can also write it the way you like, but for its comprehension, it's best to write well if you want a positive comment here and there....knida
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    Re: farter apart

    lol thanks and thats kinda the fell i was goin for lol
    and thank you both for the lovely comment and sorry about the spelling i did try to inprove it sorry

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    Re: farter apart

    That's a nice poem. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reeading your next one.

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