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Time past unshared
I was never prepared
The journey is long...
But I stay strong
Its hard when you don't know how to belong.
Ripped out of my existence
Full of all my persisence
Learning life alone
Trying to get by on my own
Its not really shown.
Time passed by
And I'm still shy
Just quitely move on
From morning till the end of dawn
Life is becoming a yawn.
Poof I'm gone!
I really like it :) It is well thought out, has good rhyme and expresses how hard it can be to find your way through life alone :)
yes, it tells how one must get threw life alone, but no matter which way you take you end up in the same place. i love it.:worship:
Thanks for the replies.
The journey maybe long but the destination is paradise :)
it is very good and is indeed well wrote, you are a good poet.
I liked the poem, it was wery good. keep up the good work. Btw please check out my poem.
WOOOOOOW!!!! ITS AWESOME! U SHOULD KEEP WRITING MORE. sometimes its hard to have a parent but u gotta put ur head up and keep moving on to make a better life. cuz in all, u dont live ur life for someone else.. u live it for urself.:smile:
GOOOOD JOOOOOOB!!!:thumb: