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    Fear is

    Fear is watching your back everyday.
    Fear is wondering when he will hit you.
    Fear is making sure you dont slip up.
    Fear is trying to not get in his way.
    Fear is not asking him stupid questions.
    Fear is hiding everytime he gets in a rage.
    That is fear my friends.

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    Re: Fear is

    A good and short poem, is sometimes all it takes ^^ and about a thing as great as fear, good job with the poem jessica ^^ keep it up, maybe a little longer next time but hey you're the writer ^^

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    Re: Fear is

    nice poem!
    but......


    Death is....

    Death is when your loved ones must depart
    Death is a sharp pain to the heart

    Death is a feeling of permanent sadness and pain
    Death is when your loved ones have forever gone away

    Death is a call to heaven or hell
    Death is an eternal mansion or cell

    Death is a lesson to learn about
    Death is a loss, without a doubt

    Death is an unhappy feeling to have
    Death is unpleasant on anyone's behalf

    Death is something we all will go through
    Death is a storm waiting to brew

    Death is a lingering crow always overhead
    Death is a soul, done being fed

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    Re: Fear is

    Thanks guys. I wrote it for a contest but it is a real as it gets i mean i used to have to do all that stuff till my mom found out and made my dad move out

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    Re: Fear is

    so sad... am sorry that i did read it!.....
    We can't show sorrow,
    or tears on the net,
    the only thing we can do is write and read!.................

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    Re: Fear is

    w0ow men rade ur one of hell poet ^_^ and wwhos has a BF/GF right now?

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    Re: Fear is

    wow these are some deep poems...i rly dnt know what esle to
    SAY?

    ..."dont pretend to know me ... when i dont even know myself..."

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    Re: Fear is

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    w0ow men rade ur one of hell poet ^_^ and wwhos has a BF/GF right now?
    yea i have my moments....lol

    about the GF thing..... i do... and you too!
    hey why do you want to know who has a gf?.... just a question dude!

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