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    Fear(I was in english class when I wrote this)

    When everything goes wrong,
    You wonder what you did,
    To deserve the scorn,
    To have everything dropped on you like this.

    It all adds up,
    And you can't understand,
    Why it's you,
    Why your life has to be damned.

    You can turn for comfort,
    In blades or pills,
    You can hide away,
    With your cheap thrills.

    When it hurts so much,
    When it's all so dark,
    That you don't think twice,
    About making your mark.

    Because you're all alone,
    And no one is there,
    No one understands,
    And no one cares.

    You could drown in the pool,
    Of blood and tears,
    It would be much easier than,
    Facing your fears.

    It doesn't seem worth it,
    The pain conquers all,
    And no one is there,
    To catch you if you fall.

    I may not be there,
    To offer you my hand,
    I can't reach out,
    And help you stand.

    But I am here,
    And I'm afraid too,
    I know all the things,
    That you could do.

    I am here for you,
    No matter what you see,
    You're not alone,
    You never could be.

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    Re: Fear(I was in english class when I wrote this)

    I have a friend who's always there for me when I feel so alone I wish I could die... Yet another awesome poem by you. I love your poems because I can relate more and understand them better... This one is up there in my favorites! Keep it up! Can't wait to read even more of your works.

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    Re: Fear(I was in english class when I wrote this)

    I really like it. It sounds like someone who is in so much pain that they're looking for an easy way out. I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Re: Fear(I was in english class when I wrote this)

    That was good. A nice little dash of happy at the end. ^_^


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