Very nice poem. I really liked it. I look forward to reading your next one.
Fearsome opinions
Erasing a memory that had not existed,
Minding the thoughts that come from others.
Relfecting ideas in an absolute fashion,
Wielding these tools without a shiver.
Yielding not back on your resolve,
Yet accepting reality as it is shown.
Flowing gently accross the debate,
Cutting short when something is to be said.
Gauging a potential rival in mist of battle,
Saluting to offer a resolve no less grand.
Self-tutoring an honest attempt,
Waiting for praise to boost a growing resolve.
Falling back on things of facts,
Or merely offering a well pondered opinion.
Not knowing the truth lies beneath us all,
Admitting defeat is but the first step to victory.
Showing passion in what you make,
Deonstrates what you wish to express.
Inspired by the user: Violent
EDIT: Makes me think of Arianna at times....or not.
Last edited by Soldat of life; Sep 24, 2006 at 08:40 PM.
Very nice poem. I really liked it. I look forward to reading your next one.
It's quite nice to hear that from you, but I'd certainly appreciate more input than it being very nice and all.........saying if it touched you or not, why did it or not touch you, what did you feel out of it, if it lacked something in particular...etc??
Hehhee its soo Violent from the second pargraph...^^
Woo like the words u use. they make the meaning stronger..
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