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    Feel my Pain , father

    Father..If you ever came to feel my pain
    or drowned for a day in my lonely rain
    you would know what its like to suffer in my hell
    If you listened to the tales I have to tell
    you would never again pass judgment on me
    you may even understand why sometimes I flee
    why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough
    or run away when life gets tough
    If you had to spend a day in my solitude
    my nightmares you couldn't elude
    the judgments you first passed would fade away
    you would probably hit the ground and pray
    to never again see the things that I've seen
    to never experience the dreams that I dream

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Feel my Pain , father

    woah.. this is good... ^^ nicely written..and nice rhymes.. keep up the good work...

    :/ sad indeed... sheesh

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    Re: Feel my Pain , father

    Awesome!!!!!
    I can relate to this poem so much!!!!!\
    Amazing job!!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: Feel my Pain , father

    I know his is a good poem, i can also relate to this poem it is very inspiring!!!!!

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    @___@ wOw... I loved reading this poem xD,
    I loved they way it rhymed and boy was it sad T.T
    Anyway this was really nicely done

    keep up the awsome work ^______^

    -zainab

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    Re: Feel my Pain , father

    OH... MY... GOD!!

    I love it!! I can totally feel your pain in this poem. I'm very sympathetic with those who have father issues, because I have them as well. What you did with this poem was simply amazing. Very well written. I hope to read more of your work! ^_^

    Mad props! Power to the bastard children!! LOL!!


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    Re: Feel my Pain , father

    wow this peom really speaks to me how some people are in real pain this is such a great poem keep the the amazing work and write a couple more your insaningly brilliant good job !

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