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Oct 01, 2007, 01:20 AM
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 Otaku  | Feel my Pain , father Father..If you ever came to feel my pain or drowned for a day in my lonely rain you would know what its like to suffer in my hell If you listened to the tales I have to tell you would never again pass judgment on me you may even understand why sometimes I flee why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough or run away when life gets tough If you had to spend a day in my solitude my nightmares you couldn't elude the judgments you first passed would fade away you would probably hit the ground and pray to never again see the things that I've seen to never experience the dreams that I dream
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Oct 01, 2007, 01:44 AM
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Oct 01, 2007, 07:34 AM
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Credits: 31,396 | Re: Feel my Pain , father Awesome!!!!! I can relate to this poem so much!!!!!\ Amazing job!!!!
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Oct 01, 2007, 01:57 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._.
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Credits: 6,397 |  Re: Feel my Pain , father @___@ wOw... I loved reading this poem xD,  I loved they way it rhymed and boy was it sad T.T  Anyway this was really nicely done  keep up the awsome work ^______^ -zainab
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Oct 05, 2007, 02:27 PM
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Credits: 110,749 | Re: Feel my Pain , father OH... MY... GOD!! I love it!! I can totally feel your pain in this poem. I'm very sympathetic with those who have father issues, because I have them as well. What you did with this poem was simply amazing. Very well written. I hope to read more of your work! ^_^ Mad props! Power to the bastard children!! LOL!! |
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Oct 07, 2007, 05:46 AM
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Credits: 1,443 | Re: Feel my Pain , father wow this peom really speaks to me how some people are in real pain this is such a great poem keep the the amazing work and write a couple more your insaningly brilliant good job ! |
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