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am feeling so sad
i can feel this pain
i gave everything i had
but never ever stays the same
am feeling so sad
that you had to leave me
dont think am gonna be mad
i know you never loved me
am feeling so sad
that you were never here
am feeling so sad
and getting into fear
Capitalization! Trust me, capitalization would make this poem more appealing.
Seduced by Flesh
@kasai: thanks i'll keep that in mind
@forever:something like that i guess
Wow that was a good poem and being sad, keep it up.
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thankxxx its my exression of how things feel inside me
i love it great work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it reminds me of someone who is full of hurt and pain
poohs my boo
awesome poem i can relate to this with how things have been in my
life right now though everything is fine .
this poem really speake of how people can hurt somone
without even realiseing it or if they dont mean to
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
thankxx boss i speak from the heart and mind, so its full heart and pure words
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