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    feel so sad

    am feeling so sad
    i can feel this pain
    i gave everything i had
    but never ever stays the same

    am feeling so sad
    that you had to leave me
    dont think am gonna be mad
    i know you never loved me

    am feeling so sad
    that you were never here
    am feeling so sad
    and getting into fear

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    Re: feel so sad

    Capitalization! Trust me, capitalization would make this poem more appealing.
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    Re: feel so sad

    @kasai: thanks i'll keep that in mind
    @forever:something like that i guess

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    Wow that was a good poem and being sad, keep it up.
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    Re: feel so sad

    thankxxx its my exression of how things feel inside me

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    Re: feel so sad

    i love it great work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it reminds me of someone who is full of hurt and pain
    poohs my boo

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    Re: feel so sad

    awesome poem i can relate to this with how things have been in my
    life right now though everything is fine .
    this poem really speake of how people can hurt somone
    without even realiseing it or if they dont mean to
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    thankxx boss i speak from the heart and mind, so its full heart and pure words

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