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    That feeling

    Do you ever get that feeling
    That keeps you going and willing
    Does it ever get you fired up
    And you just want to erupt
    You try to hide it
    You try to fight it
    It comes out
    Now you scream and shout
    You fight it with all your might
    to keep it locked up tight
    When your jealous you show that feeling
    And that really keeps you willing
    this feeling made hundreds die in fights or war
    I was to never feel this feeling a mor
    Then it comes out
    Now you scream and shout
    You hide this feeling for many years
    Now your hideing devilish fears
    This feeling is anger and hate
    people try to debate
    No matter what we can all relate
    This feeling is fate

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    Re: That feeling

    I guess some of the phrases are not match indeed...
    But almost all of them are nice...
    It's cool... Keep it up...

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    Re: That feeling

    i like it as you are reading it you can almost feel what you are discribing
    still the need more discription

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