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    A feeling called Love

    My heart lays restless and fear
    But it tells me love is near

    I follow these feelings that won't lie
    Saying he's close by

    I watch him pass by holding something
    Deep in my heart thats singing

    Whats this weird calling in me?
    Whats makes me feel free?

    Whats this weird heart felt?
    Why do I feel like I want to melt?

    It's love I tell I just know it
    Let my heart of flames lit

    Asking one thing from me
    Were we meant to be?

    I hope I could find love in both of us my dove
    Since it's just a feeling called love.

    ~End
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: A feeling called Love

    oh my. ONE OF THE BEST.....it almost made me cry....*wipes tears*

    good emotions , descriptions omg kiwi noodle i cant explain how good this is good job..*runs away crying*

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    Re: A feeling called Love

    That was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. One suggestion, try making the poem flow more. Overall, you did an amazing job. ^_^

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