oh my. ONE OF THE BEST.....it almost made me cry....*wipes tears*
good emotions , descriptions omg kiwi noodle i cant explain how good this is good job..*runs away crying*
♥~*The Princess*~♥
My heart lays restless and fear
But it tells me love is near
I follow these feelings that won't lie
Saying he's close by
I watch him pass by holding something
Deep in my heart thats singing
Whats this weird calling in me?
Whats makes me feel free?
Whats this weird heart felt?
Why do I feel like I want to melt?
It's love I tell I just know it
Let my heart of flames lit
Asking one thing from me
Were we meant to be?
I hope I could find love in both of us my dove
Since it's just a feeling called love.
~End
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
oh my. ONE OF THE BEST.....it almost made me cry....*wipes tears*
good emotions , descriptions omg kiwi noodle i cant explain how good this is good job..*runs away crying*
♥~*The Princess*~♥
Yeah, Bye.
That was a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. One suggestion, try making the poem flow more. Overall, you did an amazing job. ^_^
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