Feeling Forgotten

May_Bloodrose_Pagan · Feb 08, 2008, 07:58 AM

I feel tired with no way to sleep
I feel angery with no way to let it out
I feel stressed out with no relief
I feel sad with no more tears to cry
I feel pain with no remorse
I feel depressed with no escape
I feel alone with no one around
and I feel forgotten with no one to remind me I'm still here.

but if you feel this way, I have this to say:
If you feel tired, you can sleep on me.
If you feel angry, you can let it out on me I'll listen and understand.
If you feel stressed out, I'll try to relax you.
If you feel sad, you have my shoulder to cry on.
If you feel pain, let me try to help make it better.
If you feel depressed, you can come to me.
If you feel alone, I'm here if you need someone to talk to.
If you feel forgotten, I remember you.
If you want a freind I'm here.

Sleep forever, die alone, forever invisible, miserably unknown, every soul to care for, everyone, but your own. Dying for an escape, but there is no where left to go.

Shinigami's_Angel · Feb 10, 2008, 10:31 PM

Omg!! May!! This amazing!! I truly love it. The emotion of such saddness reminds me of myself alot. I love everything about it cause of what it reminds me about. Wonder job as always May!! ^__^

May_Bloodrose_Pagan · Feb 25, 2008, 08:06 AM

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Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel

Omg!! May!! This amazing!! I truly love it. The emotion of such saddness reminds me of myself alot. I love everything about it cause of what it reminds me about. Wonder job as always May!! ^__^

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! and if you feel that way at anytime you can talk to me!

hedgehog666 · Feb 25, 2008, 11:27 AM

that is how i fell everyday of my life thats is one poem that i could just die to turn into a song

May_Bloodrose_Pagan · Mar 11, 2008, 10:25 AM

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Originally Posted by hedgehog666

that is how i fell everyday of my life thats is one poem that i could just die to turn into a song

ohh...don't die...If yu want...you can talk to me...you don't have to...

Dragon Born · Mar 11, 2008, 01:47 PM

I feel that I am seeing the characters thoughts from FFX and FFX-2 today. You have captured the spirit of love and what one need to do when they are in love. Keep up the writting and hope that you will continue with using your heart.

May_Bloodrose_Pagan · Mar 11, 2008, 04:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Dragon Born

I feel that I am seeing the characters thoughts from FFX and FFX-2 today. You have captured the spirit of love and what one need to do when they are in love. Keep up the writting and hope that you will continue with using your heart.

"An author's best advisor is the heart, for if your heart isn't in your work, how can you except people to understand, and even like, what you are writing?"

Feb 08, 2008, 07:58 AM	#1 (permalink)
May_Bloodrose_Pagan Newbie Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Dearborn Heights, Michagan Posts: 66 Thanks: 3 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 1,676	Feeling Forgotten I feel tired with no way to sleep I feel angery with no way to let it out I feel stressed out with no relief I feel sad with no more tears to cry I feel pain with no remorse I feel depressed with no escape I feel alone with no one around and I feel forgotten with no one to remind me I'm still here. but if you feel this way, I have this to say: If you feel tired, you can sleep on me. If you feel angry, you can let it out on me I'll listen and understand. If you feel stressed out, I'll try to relax you. If you feel sad, you have my shoulder to cry on. If you feel pain, let me try to help make it better. If you feel depressed, you can come to me. If you feel alone, I'm here if you need someone to talk to. If you feel forgotten, I remember you. If you want a freind I'm here. Sleep forever, die alone, forever invisible, miserably unknown, every soul to care for, everyone, but your own. Dying for an escape, but there is no where left to go. __________________ Very Deeply Misunderstood
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Feb 10, 2008, 10:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	Re: Felling Forgotten Omg!! May!! This amazing!! I truly love it. The emotion of such saddness reminds me of myself alot. I love everything about it cause of what it reminds me about. Wonder job as always May!! ^__^ __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Feb 25, 2008, 11:27 AM	#4 (permalink)
hedgehog666 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: in the darkness Posts: 130 Thanks: 7 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 2,799	Re: Felling Forgotten that is how i fell everyday of my life thats is one poem that i could just die to turn into a song
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Dragon Born Newbie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: One of the many levels of Hell Posts: 46 Thanks: 5 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,080	Re: Feeling Forgotten I feel that I am seeing the characters thoughts from FFX and FFX-2 today. You have captured the spirit of love and what one need to do when they are in love. Keep up the writting and hope that you will continue with using your heart. __________________ "How to draw a dragon: 'Cautiously approach the dragon, offer it a piece of candy or a little sister, and draw while it happily munches away.'" J. Neodragon Peffer
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