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    Feeling Forgotten

    I feel tired with no way to sleep
    I feel angery with no way to let it out
    I feel stressed out with no relief
    I feel sad with no more tears to cry
    I feel pain with no remorse
    I feel depressed with no escape
    I feel alone with no one around
    and I feel forgotten with no one to remind me I'm still here.

    but if you feel this way, I have this to say:
    If you feel tired, you can sleep on me.
    If you feel angry, you can let it out on me I'll listen and understand.
    If you feel stressed out, I'll try to relax you.
    If you feel sad, you have my shoulder to cry on.
    If you feel pain, let me try to help make it better.
    If you feel depressed, you can come to me.
    If you feel alone, I'm here if you need someone to talk to.
    If you feel forgotten, I remember you.
    If you want a freind I'm here.

    Sleep forever, die alone, forever invisible, miserably unknown, every soul to care for, everyone, but your own. Dying for an escape, but there is no where left to go.

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Re: Felling Forgotten

    Omg!! May!! This amazing!! I truly love it. The emotion of such saddness reminds me of myself alot. I love everything about it cause of what it reminds me about. Wonder job as always May!! ^__^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Felling Forgotten

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Omg!! May!! This amazing!! I truly love it. The emotion of such saddness reminds me of myself alot. I love everything about it cause of what it reminds me about. Wonder job as always May!! ^__^
    Thanks! I'm glad you like it! and if you feel that way at anytime you can talk to me!

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    Re: Felling Forgotten

    that is how i fell everyday of my life thats is one poem that i could just die to turn into a song

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    Re: Felling Forgotten

    Quote Originally Posted by hedgehog666 View Post
    that is how i fell everyday of my life thats is one poem that i could just die to turn into a song
    ohh...don't die...If yu want...you can talk to me...you don't have to...

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    Re: Feeling Forgotten

    I feel that I am seeing the characters thoughts from FFX and FFX-2 today. You have captured the spirit of love and what one need to do when they are in love. Keep up the writting and hope that you will continue with using your heart.
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    Re: Feeling Forgotten

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragon Born View Post
    I feel that I am seeing the characters thoughts from FFX and FFX-2 today. You have captured the spirit of love and what one need to do when they are in love. Keep up the writting and hope that you will continue with using your heart.
    "An author's best advisor is the heart, for if your heart isn't in your work, how can you except people to understand, and even like, what you are writing?"

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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