+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Feeling Of Yearning

  1. #1
    Newbie dark angle is off to a good start dark angle's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    amanda, ohio
    Posts
    18
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 13 Times in 13 Posts

    Feeling Of Yearning

    a poem about a girl hoping to see her love again but ends up finding out shes not aloud to see him.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------
    sadness within her eyes tears fall down her face,
    she lets out a sigh and says, "will i ever see him?"
    so depressed laying on her bad thinking what a wast...
    she lets out a big scream but it dosen't help...

    laying down trying to calm herself
    "what if i wont be able to see him?"
    thinking about she might not see him only brings sadness...
    the feeling of sadness longing to see him for so long...

    everything shes hoping for...just wanting to see him...
    knowing she can still hear his voice knowing hes ok,
    walking around trying to calm herself
    "waht can i do?" she says feeling lost,

    such pain in her heart feeling like its about to brake,
    wishing upon the stars just to see his face
    so much to take in is more then she can take,
    she takes a deep breath knowing they'll be togetter soon

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

  2. #2
    God Of Angelz Submarine Champion, Rocket Racer MX Champion, Pencak Champion, Grand Prix Challenge 2 Champion, Twelve Swap Champion, Penguin Pass Champion, Crab Volleyball Champion, Hockey Shooter Champion, Trick Master Funky Champion, Mah-Jong Connect Champion, W.R.A.X. Champion dark1angel may be famous one day dark1angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Location
    Where the angels fly within.
    Posts
    1,003
    Thanks
    144
    Thanked 64 Times in 60 Posts

    Re: Feeling Of Yearning

    This is really interesting my own thoughts and wow i am speechless about the issue, so im guessing this girl is i know who it is but i cannot say it because it is confidential and now this girl is waiting to seek the answer to her question about seeing him again. This is really powerful in a way that i can hardly comprehend anyways good luck with every new poem you create in the future. Good Luck.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
    |アスタロス|

+ Reply to Thread

Similar Threads

  1. How I'm Feeling Now
    By Soshi Kitai in forum Soshi Kitai's Journal
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: Feb 23, 2009, 08:25 PM
  2. Feeling Forgotten
    By May_Bloodrose_Pagan in forum Poems
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: Mar 11, 2008, 04:45 PM
  3. This New Feeling
    By Tetsanosuke Kirikami in forum Poems
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: Dec 13, 2007, 03:02 PM
  4. feeling alone!!!
    By cloud101 in forum Cyber Lounge
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: Dec 07, 2006, 10:18 AM
  5. That feeling
    By Loyal Prince in forum Poems
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: Sep 27, 2006, 10:29 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts