I hold them deep inside me
Forbidding them to grow
They sneak their way out occasionally
It's then my true feelings show
It's hard for me to keep them in
Difficult for me to control
I struggle, trying to keep them there
These feelings I can't let go
Some days are filled with happiness
Others taken over by blue
I hold them deep inside of me
And silently keep loving you
aww thats such a sweet poem really i know what u mean its the same with every one. its a really good poem i think every one can easly understand it great job!!
it is dedicated to my crush..
hahahaha, kinda miss her..
i wish she can read this.. but she's not onto
forums at all.. (sighs)
oo Crush eh? :devil: Lol, jkin jkin :D
I really like this one. The rhyming was good, so was the flow. I didn't get exactly what feeling you were tryin to say at the beginning, but you gave away the answer in the last line. Great job.
wow wow wow .....nice i love it ...:smile:
In the days and nights that's past…
I cherished every touch at task.
Now, today the futures clear…
I want the past to stay right here.
In your arms is where I'll be…
Only then will I be set free.
With a touch and kiss that's shared…
My heart will melt and grow with care.
Like the wind leaves a chilling breeze…
Your words have a strong impact on me.
Every moment your away…
My thoughts tell me away you'll stay.
I've dreamt of a love so true…
Now, its here within you.
I never thought this dream could be…
And here you are so near me.
I'll give you all I have to give…
My heart and my love for as long as I live.
Share with me your love so true…
Is all I ask for you to do.
And I promise to never leave you blue.....:2thumbs: :2thumbs:
Nice poem that's about a crush you once had. I wonder if she ever read this would she want to be with you. Good job I look forward to reading your next one.
wow, if ever she reads this and started to like me?...
i will grab the opportunity and make her fall to me..
hehehe.. although i havent seen her for about a week now.
she's having a summer class..
waahhh... (-maya, will you bring out the anime in you?) hehehe
A really cool poem, if I'd be that girl and red this, I'd definetely fall to you... I like the fact that you can express your feelings in a beoutiful way like this... it's a great gift! :) I hope she'll find out about your feelings so you shouldn't keep thim in yourselfe like this... although it helps you make these beoutiful poems...