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Sep 10, 2006, 11:27 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: should i?
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 Credits: 110 | feels and destination people..what are you looking for? people..i do not understand all of you.. why are you so difficult to understand.. do you understand what are you doing? do you understand what are you searching for? do you understand who are you? do i know what i'm doing now? do i know what i am searching for? do this feeling is real? do this feeling is the right one? did this is the feel which all of you experienced.. all the time before? feels... how to feel it? how do we know it...? how come...we have these feels? how come...i have these feels? am i'm doing right? are you doing right? feels... is it the right feels or not? can we run this life by this kind of feeling? what is the destiny that will face of human.. of me... by having this? do you...i realize it? did you..i realize it? ______ haha.. i'm new in this topic. good or not... this poetry.. i do not know...the true feels.... feels... where is it come from... why did i feel it... haha... i think i'm too serious in my poetry... ok.. how was it? |
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Sep 11, 2006, 12:26 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,212 | Re: feels and destination i like thi pome it comes from someone who is very inquisitive just like you should be ,because your a kid and to see this poem sort of remind me of how kids aree like this and t very coolt that they need to know thing's feeling is a big for kids and how you expressed it was pretty good i like this alot. hope you do another poems like this keep me smiling about kids and there thought's |
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Sep 11, 2006, 12:30 AM
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Credits: 2,552 | Re: feels and destination A more appropriate title would've been "Questions of the Sensitive Mind"................this is a poem where the answer is individualized to each reader.......seems to expect reader self-examination........which I have no prob with whatsoever. I like it! |
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Sep 11, 2006, 01:33 AM
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| Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: feels and destination Poem is great because it ask the reader what he feels and it takes your mind in so many different directions! Awesome job at this for you first time at this type of poetry! BlueFox1 |
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