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    feels and destination

    people..what are you looking for?
    people..i do not understand all of you..
    why are you so difficult to understand..

    do you understand what are you doing?
    do you understand what are you searching for?
    do you understand who are you?

    do i know what i'm doing now?
    do i know what i am searching for?

    do this feeling is real?
    do this feeling is the right one?
    did this is the feel which all of you experienced.. all the time before?

    feels...
    how to feel it?
    how do we know it...?
    how come...we have these feels?
    how come...i have these feels?


    am i'm doing right?
    are you doing right?

    feels...
    is it the right feels or not?

    can we run this life by this kind of feeling?
    what is the destiny that will face of human.. of me... by having this?
    do you...i realize it?
    did you..i realize it?
    ______
    haha.. i'm new in this topic.
    good or not... this poetry.. i do not know...the true feels....
    feels... where is it come from...
    why did i feel it...

    haha... i think i'm too serious in my poetry...

    ok.. how was it?

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    Re: feels and destination

    i like thi pome it comes from someone who is very inquisitive
    just like you should be ,because your a kid and to see this poem
    sort of remind me of how kids aree like this and t very coolt that
    they need to know thing's feeling is a big for kids and how you
    expressed it was pretty good i like this alot. hope you do another
    poems like this keep me smiling about kids and there thought's
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: feels and destination

    A more appropriate title would've been "Questions of the Sensitive Mind"................this is a poem where the answer is individualized to each reader.......seems to expect reader self-examination........which I have no prob with whatsoever.
    I like it!
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: feels and destination

    Poem is great because it ask the reader what he feels and it takes your mind in so many different directions! Awesome job at this for you first time at this type of poetry!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: feels and destination

    This poem sure has a lot of questions inserted, it should have been better if the title is entitled Difficult Questions or the one suggested by the other member...BTW,nice poem ^_^

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    Re: feels and destination

    hehe.. thank everyone.
    next time i'll post another my poetry..

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