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    Fell Me...

    You must LEAVE me... not cause I want you to go,
    but I feel you "FALLING" from me like leaves from a tree...

    Is is that time already.?? Comes around like seasons...
    Look into my life...Oopps!?! You can't see in...

    Let me open these curtains of my soul; to better
    your sight, so you can see in...

    See!!? I dislike treason...
    I lost people close to me for that reason...

    Deception is more imposturous... It is deceiving...
    Giving is better than taking & getting is better than receiving..
    I was on the worst end on both of those thesis...

    Only two girls actually had my heart
    & we were a pair like a couple cups of Reese's...
    Bite sized down & became more like Reese's Pieces...

    I broke away from loves' cuffs cause I never knew what free is...
    Once my feelings became untamed; it didn't know what a lock is...

    Well back to the topic...

    I hate...HATE... I love...LOVE, but disapprove of
    the emotional mind state...

    REAL is real... FAKE is fake... And the TRUTH alliterate...
    My tree you can't shake...
    HAA!!! THANKS, Peach... You are a person I'd like to meet...
    Nevermind you are a FRIEND I'd like to keep...

    I'm so FABOLOus all I do is BREATHE...
    I'm so rimy I remind you of a blizzardy freeze...

    Rhyme is so in me...
    I believe it is trying to take over my identity...

    I am not that conceited....
    I'm totally opposite of vain, if real is realLY...

    My egotistical just rose a notch
    & I am expressing it verbally....

    I always keep my guard up at top
    just in case someone tries to press me...

    You can't pass, so the test you can keep...
    In other words "don't test me"...

    I sheppard my lambs & keep
    away from wolves in linen of sheep...

    Walked in circles for too long that my trails are deep...
    Gunners...Gun... Sprinters...Run... & crawlers...Creep...

    My soul is mine & you can't have it, if you was buying for high
    or if, I was selling it for cheap...

    Never That though!!! Cause I am never sold, so you can't sell me...
    I know you "FELL" me or in other words you "FAIL TO SEE"...
    CURTAINS CLOSED!!!....


    I might have to explain this later & what is the reason behind this poem... In other words "why I wrote it"..? It really was just a way to see if I can let people know a bit of me in poetry form... I wrote it for my myspace page for the "about me" section... I am going to put it under my "EVIL With my Bubbles" poem... Just to go with it in a way cause most people didn't understand it & just like this poem they ae not going to understand this one... So the both of them explains me VERY WELL... lol
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    Re: Fell Me...

    I love this poem from what I see on the surface... but I kinda don't get it... I mean I know theres something beneath the surface. Something to do with leaves and fall , and reese blizards! (Damn that sounds good)

    Don't think you got one over on me... because you didn't... Im going to figure this out... Im at leat going to figure out a portion of it. A portion you didn't expect anyone to figure out... Why? Because I got it like that!

    HAA!!! THANKS, Peach... You are a person I'd like to meet...
    Nevermind you are a FRIEND I'd like to keep...
    Aw....... That made me feel special.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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