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    few poems

    Red rose

    Red rose so beautiful
    Death of a rose so deep
    Red is so wonderful
    Roses will put you to an eternal sleep

    Black death

    Black my sorrow
    Death is my love
    It was powerful control on me
    No I’m dead
    But I always like to dream of you beside
    This death bed.

    Going insane

    I’m not crazy no I’m not
    It’s your lies that brought me to
    This place. Now I’m going insane
    You have caused me so much pain
    Saying you loved me such a lie you put
    In my mind

    Ghost of you

    Your haunting me
    I run but can’t see
    I need a guiding hand
    I’m sinking in sand
    I live misery
    You keep appearing
    Then I see you disappearing
    I miss you
    It’s the ghost of you I see
    Bad nightmares of you
    So….. I throw your picture against the wall
    And then I get away from it all.

    Choke

    Now that your gone
    Every time I see a picture of you
    I start to choke
    I start to die.
    Eyes rolling back but then
    I go to my room and grab the knife
    Cut! Cut! My chest, my arms, my whole body
    Did you feel that! My blood dripping on your arm
    How do you like that does it make you happy
    As I fall wishing you would help.


    I wrote these poems when i was sad i have lots more
    “If I were the rain that binds together the earth and the sky, whom in all mingle, would I be able to bind two hearts together?”- Orinime Inoue

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    Re: few poems

    wow! nice poem, keep it up.

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    Re: few poems

    Hmm. I bit more imagery.
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    Re: few poems

    I agree with Kasai just a little bit more imagery, but other than that good job on the poem!

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    Re: few poems

    Wow dat poem is fascinating.It makes me wish i can rite lyk dat.Keep it up.Enchant me.

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    Re: few poems

    I want to see some more from your works... It adds to my sadness...
    Good job...

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    Re: few poems

    that was a really good poem even though i could tell u rite now since im sitting nxt 2 u n the comp lab lolz

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    Re: few poems

    I like them but they are a bit depressing.. I can deal with that.. I like sad poems.. anger.. you name it..
    Thank you Lasura!
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