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    A Fighter

    I am the Archangel of Death.
    All who oppose me fall,
    Bones broken, muscles bruised,
    Blood sream from the head downwards.

    My body is my weapon,
    Capable of causing pain,
    Death but is also able to love,
    Protect those I hold dear.

    When I fight, time seems to crawl.
    The impact of my elbows, fist, kicks,
    seemed to hit harder than
    I thought it would. Bones cracked,
    Screams of agony and they fall.

    The most painful thing is to use
    A knife and cut off their nerves.
    Leave them shaking, and go in
    for kill.

    People fight for reasons;to protect,
    to gain wealth and fame, to prove
    their strength. I use it to kill and bring
    down anyone who dare opposes me.

    I dunno if this is good or not but hey i'm bored.

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    Re: A Fighter

    Soo.....much....gore XD

    Considering that I got a great image of what you were trying to say, then I say its brilliant ^_^
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    Re: A Fighter

    Its ok and considering im not really a poem person so thats pretty good
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    Re: A Fighter

    Were you mad when you wrote this!! (^_^) nice poem man.

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    Re: A Fighter

    Quote Originally Posted by ketaro
    Were you mad when you wrote this!! (^_^) nice poem man.
    Nah, I jus bored and I jus like watch Tony Jaa's movies like Ong Bak and Tom Yum Goong. So i got my idea from tht.

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    Re: A Fighter

    wow. that was good. keep it up!
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    Re: A Fighter

    You seem like a merciless fighter...one who seems to enjoy the kill, to let loose and exert your rage on others, at least as the writting implies in my opinion. It may not represent who you are, but you might possibly be in a situation where you want to release a certain strain....not sure though so in other things, its quite nice, subtle even if clearly showing someone fighting, it can mean many things, which is how I like my own writtings to be XD

    Keep up the thoughts and write down to let things become easier after, if it doesn't help, well at least it practices if ever you need to write one the next time you wanna :P
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    Re: A Fighter

    am a hellknight fighter, not much into poets but its a start

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