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    Re: A Fighter

    I think u got the right idea goin there(by right idea, I mean in relation to the killing), nah just kiddin. Well, to be honest I like the message and emotional relief overall. But I guess u could work a bit better on your poetry technique. I really suck at poetry, so I wouldn't know.
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    ..................... =^.^= ummm... Well the poem is called fighter. I like it.. If your going for that. Keep up the writing.
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    Re: A Fighter

    Like Cerebrum said I like the emotion it gives, but this is my style of writing so I would like this poem, the techniques of, but it does give a great image


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    Re: A Fighter

    I'm not really a big fan of poems but i gotta say thats pretty good.

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    Re: A Fighter

    Well arnt we evil.
    Nice work.

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    Re: A Fighter

    wow...that was really good...u got anymore?
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    Re: A Fighter

    that was impressive keep it up

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    Re: A Fighter

    figthing, fighting....ur really gd at tat and nice work

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