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    Final Poem

    This is my final poem of the day.
    No longer do I want to play.
    I do not want to write if I
    only make my poor self cry.

    This is my last poem until sunrise.
    I must wipe the tears from my eyes
    and take a look at where I'm headed.
    I must try to hide my pain and forget it.

    This is my last poem until daybreak,
    because I don't want them to see my heartache.
    My sweat and my blood I poured out today,
    so I won't make you suffer by reading all day.

    This is my last poem, for I am spent.
    I must find my heart, have you seen where it went?


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    Re: Final Poem

    hum sounds like a song. but it is good none the less, hum yes go calm yourself down sprout you deserve it. keep it up man
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    Re: Final Poem

    I agree it kinda flows like a song. This is a really clever poem. I like it a lot. Too bad I won't get to see if you do write tomorrow. But it's saturday tomorrow anyways. Doubt you'll be on AO. But I won't be at a computer either way.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Final Poem

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    hum sounds like a song. but it is good none the less, hum yes go calm yourself down sprout you deserve it. keep it up man
    Thanks, Ichigo! I had to quit writing for the day. My brain was starting to hurt to the point that it felt like it would implode. >_< I'm glad you like this one though. ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    I agree it kinda flows like a song. This is a really clever poem. I like it a lot. Too bad I won't get to see if you do write tomorrow. But it's saturday tomorrow anyways. Doubt you'll be on AO. But I won't be at a computer either way.
    Oh, I'll be on tomorrow and you'll like it, LOL. I DO have a PSP, so I'm not worried about people hoggin' the computer--only Alondra and 59wayz's laptops killing my connection, LOL.


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    Re: Final Poem

    well sprout, this is your last poem for the day so to you I say farewell...
    (It is your last? Right?)
    nah just kidding this is great. go and get some sleep.

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    Re: Final Poem

    i found it to be really cool...and it does sound like a song but one i never heard of ^_^
    Just two of my Favorite Quotes ;D
    Tao Le Ching: "It is only by not trusting that you turn someone into a liar."
    George Carlin:"If you can't beat them, arrange to have them beaten."

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    Re: Final Poem

    Yeah...well I won't "like" it cus I won't know. I'm going up north at least for the night. I donno if I'll be back saturday sunday or monday. But I'll be back to see what ou wrote eventually.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Final Poem

    this poem is a bit different (positively i mean) ... but it's great over all ... good work
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