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    Re: Final Poem

    Awesome.........has depth to it and I love how the words flow.......
    Great job!!!!!!
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    Re: Final Poem

    nicely done atomik_sprout.when i first saw the tittle i thought:"wait..final poem?why?is he going to stop writing?"..silly me
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    I must find my heart, have you seen where it went?
    i like the end of it

    great job^^keep it up

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    Re: Final Poem

    This is a very good job from you... the flow was great... ^^ it was nicely done there...

    I like this one... keep it up.. ^^

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    Re: Final Poem

    Great job! And your not making us suffer! I like your work! keep it up! cant wait for more! lol!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Final Poem

    this is a very nice poem...is this is your last for the day then i want to see what you come up with tomorrow...^_^!!=) good job!

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    Re: Final Poem

    Holy cow! I leave for the weekend and get a TON of comments! Wow!

    Thanks to all of you for your wonderful replies and your positive input! I appreciate all of you taking the time to read my work! ^_^


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