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    Final Stand

    The only thing left.
    The last breath.
    The feeling of bliss,
    in that one final kiss.

    The feeling of loss.
    Never knowing why.
    The feeling of dieing.
    Makes you want to cry.

    That one little slip.
    That one mistake.
    The cold upon your lips.
    The deepend sign.

    That total eclipse.
    The darkness at hand.
    The sanity slips.
    That one final stand.

    Be bold.
    Be safe.
    Don't be scared.
    Be anything but.

    Give me your hand.
    Let me be the one.

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    Re: Final Stand

    I don't know what this is about. Perhaps that is why I like it so much. Its like trying on someone elses clothes, and yet they fit perfectly. To you... this carries great meaning. I could tell just in the passionate wording. And I'm 100% sure this means something totally different to me.... yet, because of the descriptive emotion... Its just as powerful for me to read as Im sure it was for you to write.


    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post

    That one little slip.
    That one mistake.
    The cold upon your lips.
    The deepend sign.

    ..
    That part reminds me of the worst mistake I ever made. It felt just like that... where you have to sit back and wonder how such a travesty could be the result of "one little mistake"
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Final Stand

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    I don't know what this is about. Perhaps that is why I like it so much. Its like trying on someone elses clothes, and yet they fit perfectly. To you... this carries great meaning. I could tell just in the passionate wording. And I'm 100% sure this means something totally different to me.... yet, because of the descriptive emotion... Its just as powerful for me to read as Im sure it was for you to write.




    That part reminds me of the worst mistake I ever made. It felt just like that... where you have to sit back and wonder how such a travesty could be the result of "one little mistake"
    This in a sense is actually a love poem
    to tell you
    Never give up
    Believe in your self and forgive ur past mistakes
    I deepen in words not so many
    because i know that many interpret my work to be different than intended

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    Re: Final Stand

    Quote Originally Posted by starfire1036 View Post
    This in a sense is actually a love poem
    to tell you
    Never give up
    Believe in your self and forgive ur past mistakes
    I deepen in words not so many
    because i know that many interpret my work to be different than intended
    you know you all have to read it to understand it right??

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