Thread: Final Stand

I don't know what this is about. Perhaps that is why I like it so much. Its like trying on someone elses clothes, and yet they fit perfectly. To you... this carries great meaning. I could tell just in the passionate wording. And I'm 100% sure this means something totally different to me.... yet, because of the descriptive emotion... Its just as powerful for me to read as Im sure it was for you to write.

Originally Posted by starfire1036

That one little slip.
That one mistake.
The cold upon your lips.
The deepend sign.

..

That part reminds me of the worst mistake I ever made. It felt just like that... where you have to sit back and wonder how such a travesty could be the result of "one little mistake"

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

I don't know what this is about. Perhaps that is why I like it so much. Its like trying on someone elses clothes, and yet they fit perfectly. To you... this carries great meaning. I could tell just in the passionate wording. And I'm 100% sure this means something totally different to me.... yet, because of the descriptive emotion... Its just as powerful for me to read as Im sure it was for you to write.




That part reminds me of the worst mistake I ever made. It felt just like that... where you have to sit back and wonder how such a travesty could be the result of "one little mistake"

This in a sense is actually a love poem
to tell you
Never give up
Believe in your self and forgive ur past mistakes
I deepen in words not so many
because i know that many interpret my work to be different than intended

Originally Posted by starfire1036

This in a sense is actually a love poem
to tell you
Never give up
Believe in your self and forgive ur past mistakes
I deepen in words not so many
because i know that many interpret my work to be different than intended

you know you all have to read it to understand it right??