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Old Apr 15, 2007, 06:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Finally

I wait by the window,
To see if you’d come.
I waited eagerly,
And filled my glass with rum.

Mother said you’d ditch,
And never come.
I got more worried and,
Overfilled the glass with rum.

I start to see double,
But I won’t give up yet.
I start to get sleepy,
I’d be damn if I let the sleepiness let.

But my eyes get heavy,
And the glass begins to fall.
I drift off to sleep,
Why did I give a damn at all?

You’d never come,
Bet you never cared.
And to say I fell in love,
Why did I dare?

In my dreams,
I float on a cloud.
What a heavenly carry,
That’s o so mild.

I dream of you,
And you beautiful hair.
Your sexy smile,
But where you there?

I open my eyes,
There you stood smiling.
I knocked your head,
And said “Wow good timing.”
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Old Apr 15, 2007, 06:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Finally

Love hurts? I Couldn't figure out the theme... Entertaining poem, too.
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Old Apr 15, 2007, 06:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Finally

Sounds good.... I have a question though did he/she leave & come back or was it just a dream of them leaving u..?
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Old Apr 17, 2007, 12:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Finally

this poem's entertaining.One question though.What I don't get is whether this is actually happening or it was just a dream?I am not certain.
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Old Apr 17, 2007, 07:01 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Wow! I cud relate to that. if he eva shows up. hee hee hee! i really like it. write again soon!
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Old Apr 17, 2007, 07:09 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Finally

I enjoyed this poem very much, it's funny somewhere, serious and even sad elsewhere and all together- verry interesting. I like your cool attitude to this girl too.
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