Love hurts? I Couldn't figure out the theme...Entertaining poem, too.
I wait by the window,
To see if you’d come.
I waited eagerly,
And filled my glass with rum.
Mother said you’d ditch,
And never come.
I got more worried and,
Overfilled the glass with rum.
I start to see double,
But I won’t give up yet.
I start to get sleepy,
I’d be damn if I let the sleepiness let.
But my eyes get heavy,
And the glass begins to fall.
I drift off to sleep,
Why did I give a damn at all?
You’d never come,
Bet you never cared.
And to say I fell in love,
Why did I dare?
In my dreams,
I float on a cloud.
What a heavenly carry,
That’s o so mild.
I dream of you,
And you beautiful hair.
Your sexy smile,
But where you there?
I open my eyes,
There you stood smiling.
I knocked your head,
And said “Wow good timing.”
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Love hurts? I Couldn't figure out the theme...Entertaining poem, too.
Sounds good.... I have a question though did he/she leave & come back or was it just a dream of them leaving u..?
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
this poem's entertaining.One question though.What I don't get is whether this is actually happening or it was just a dream?I am not certain.
Wow! I cud relate to that. if he eva shows up. hee hee hee! i really like it. write again soon!
Life's short so have a laugh about it
I enjoyed this poem very much, it's funny somewhere, serious and even sad elsewhere and all together- verry interesting.I like your cool attitude to this girl too.
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