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    Finally

    I wait by the window,
    To see if you’d come.
    I waited eagerly,
    And filled my glass with rum.

    Mother said you’d ditch,
    And never come.
    I got more worried and,
    Overfilled the glass with rum.

    I start to see double,
    But I won’t give up yet.
    I start to get sleepy,
    I’d be damn if I let the sleepiness let.

    But my eyes get heavy,
    And the glass begins to fall.
    I drift off to sleep,
    Why did I give a damn at all?

    You’d never come,
    Bet you never cared.
    And to say I fell in love,
    Why did I dare?

    In my dreams,
    I float on a cloud.
    What a heavenly carry,
    That’s o so mild.

    I dream of you,
    And you beautiful hair.
    Your sexy smile,
    But where you there?

    I open my eyes,
    There you stood smiling.
    I knocked your head,
    And said “Wow good timing.”
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    Re: Finally

    Love hurts? I Couldn't figure out the theme... Entertaining poem, too.

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    Re: Finally

    Sounds good.... I have a question though did he/she leave & come back or was it just a dream of them leaving u..?

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Finally

    this poem's entertaining.One question though.What I don't get is whether this is actually happening or it was just a dream?I am not certain.

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    Re: Finally

    Wow! I cud relate to that. if he eva shows up. hee hee hee! i really like it. write again soon!
    Life's short so have a laugh about it

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    Re: Finally

    I enjoyed this poem very much, it's funny somewhere, serious and even sad elsewhere and all together- verry interesting. I like your cool attitude to this girl too.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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