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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana
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![]() Credits: 4,261 | Finally I wait by the window, To see if you’d come. I waited eagerly, And filled my glass with rum. Mother said you’d ditch, And never come. I got more worried and, Overfilled the glass with rum. I start to see double, But I won’t give up yet. I start to get sleepy, I’d be damn if I let the sleepiness let. But my eyes get heavy, And the glass begins to fall. I drift off to sleep, Why did I give a damn at all? You’d never come, Bet you never cared. And to say I fell in love, Why did I dare? In my dreams, I float on a cloud. What a heavenly carry, That’s o so mild. I dream of you, And you beautiful hair. Your sexy smile, But where you there? I open my eyes, There you stood smiling. I knocked your head, And said “Wow good timing.”
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,887 | Re: Finally Love hurts? I Couldn't figure out the theme... Entertaining poem, too.
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![]() Credits: 9,871 | Re: Finally Sounds good.... I have a question though did he/she leave & come back or was it just a dream of them leaving u..?
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![]() ![]() Credits: 689 | Re: Finally Wow! I cud relate to that. if he eva shows up. hee hee hee! i really like it. write again soon!
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![]() Credits: 49,375 | Re: Finally I enjoyed this poem very much, it's funny somewhere, serious and even sad elsewhere and all together- verry interesting. I like your cool attitude to this girl too. |
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